Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法和表达有些错误，如“every little things that happens”应为“every little thing that happens”，且句子结构稍显冗长。建议简化句子，注意主谓一致，并使用更自然的表达。

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because I am quite talkative. Sharing small details about my life helps us stay close, especially since we live far apart now.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“try to and the most”不完整，且句子衔接不够流畅。建议使用连接词使内容更连贯，并注意表达完整。

Exemplo: I usually talk about many things, like trying new foods. For instance, I recently tried some delicious coffee and recommended it to my friends. Also, I shared my stress about preparing for the IELTS test, which made me feel supported.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误，如“one or two person”应为“one or two people”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免口语化错误。

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with one or two close friends because I am a bit shy and don't feel comfortable talking in large groups.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“allows for allows for”，且“however signs”表达不清。建议简化句子，注意语法和逻辑连接。

Exemplo: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and I can understand body language better. However, since my friends live far away, we usually keep in touch through social media.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复词汇“on on”，且口语填充词“Umm”影响流畅度。建议减少重复和填充词，使用更正式的表达。

Exemplo: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions. For example, we might disagree about which movie to watch or how to solve a problem, but these arguments are usually minor and short-lived.

× I like to share every little things that happens in my life with them which helps strengthen our bond especially now we live far apart.

✓ I like to share every little thing that happens in my life with them which helps strengthen our bond especially now we live far apart.

“things”应为单数“thing”，因为前面有“every”，表示每一个，后面动词“happens”也用单数形式。

× I really chat with my friends about almost everything that happens in my life.

✓ I really chat with my friends about almost everything that happens in my life.

此句无错误，保持原句。

× For example, I tried the coffee, I found it was delicious and I would recommend the coffee to my friends.

✓ For example, I tried the coffee, I found it was delicious and I would recommend the coffee to my friends.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× I want them to try to and the most.

✓ I want them to try it too, and the most.

“try to”应为“try it”，表示“尝试它”；“and the most”表达不完整，需补充或改为“too”表示“也”。

× Recently I shared a lot of stress about PR preparing for the eyes test, which helps me feel more supported.

✓ Recently I shared a lot of stress about PR preparing for the eye test, which helps me feel more supported.

“eyes test”应为单数“eye test”，因为“eye test”是固定搭配，表示视力测试。

× I prefer to chat with one or two person that is my best friend.

✓ I prefer to chat with one or two people that are my best friends.

“person”应为复数“people”，因为数量超过一个；“is”应改为“are”，主谓一致；“best friend”应改为复数“best friends”。

× I'm not an E person.

✓ I'm not an extroverted person.

“E person”表达不清，应使用完整词汇“extroverted person”表示“外向的人”。

× I am more like I'll be shy to chat a lot of people.

✓ I am more like I'll be shy to chat with a lot of people.

“chat a lot of people”缺少介词“with”，正确表达为“chat with a lot of people”。

× If I had the chance, I definitely prefer to communicate face to face because it feels more personal and allows for allows for better understanding through body language however signs.

✓ If I had the chance, I definitely prefer to communicate face to face because it feels more personal and allows for better understanding through body language and facial expressions.

“however signs”表达不清，应改为“and facial expressions”表示“面部表情”，且“allows for”重复，应删除多余部分。

× My friend and I live far apart now so we usually keep in touch through social media almost every day.

✓ My friend and I live far apart now so we usually keep in touch through social media almost every day.

此句无错误，保持原句。

× Yes, sometimes I do argue with my friends when we have a different perspective on on things.

✓ Yes, sometimes I do argue with my friends when we have different perspectives on things.

“a different perspective”应改为复数“different perspectives”，因为主语是复数“we”。

× Umm, for example, we might disagree about which movie to watch or how to solve a problem, but these arguments are very small and don't last long.

✓ Umm, for example, we might disagree about which movie to watch or how to solve a problem, but these arguments are very small and don't last long.

此句无错误，保持原句。