Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'social proper people's person' and 'sending rails in the Instagram'. To improve, use clear and natural expressions, correct grammar, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends both in person and online. We often talk about our daily lives and share interesting experiences or opinions.

Sugestão: Your answer has many hesitations and filler words, which affect fluency. Try to speak more smoothly and organize your ideas clearly. Also, provide specific examples and use appropriate vocabulary to describe topics you discuss.

Exemplo: We usually talk about daily events, like funny incidents at school or basketball games, since I enjoy playing basketball.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Focus on expressing your preference clearly and support it with reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group because it allows me to hear different opinions and meet new people, which makes conversations more interesting.

Sugestão: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to explain your reasons logically.

Exemplo: I prefer communicating through social media because it helps me feel less nervous and allows me to express all my thoughts freely.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammatical errors and hesitations. Try to speak more confidently and use correct verb forms. Provide clear reasons and avoid unnecessary fillers.

Exemplo: Sometimes I argue with friends if they say something hurtful or do something that upsets me, but I usually try to avoid conflicts.

× I'm a social proper people's person so I enjoy chatting with friends either offline or online and I always chatting with people or sending rails in the Instagram.

✓ I'm a proper social person, so I enjoy chatting with friends either offline or online, and I am always chatting with people or sending replies on Instagram.

The phrase 'social proper people's person' is incorrect. 'Proper' should modify 'social' to form 'proper social person'. Also, 'always chatting' requires the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. 'Sending rails' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'sending replies'. 'In the Instagram' should be 'on Instagram' because we use 'on' with social media platforms.

× I always chatting with people or sending rails in the Instagram.

✓ I am always chatting with people or sending replies on Instagram.

The verb phrase 'always chatting' needs the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense correctly: 'I am always chatting'. Without 'am', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× sending rails in the Instagram.

✓ sending replies on Instagram.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to social media platforms. The correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'rails' is likely a typo for 'replies'.

× We just chat about our life, what's interesting in my our lives and share about our own views.

✓ We just chat about our lives, what's interesting in our lives, and share our own views.

The word 'life' should be plural 'lives' to match the plural subject 'we'. Also, 'my our lives' is incorrect; it should be 'our lives'. The phrase 'share about our own views' should be 'share our own views' because 'share' does not require 'about'.

× We usually chat about some daily, uh, things such as what we have happened in our school time, uh, some, uh, uh, very, uh, laughful things, uh, that happened in our classes or, uh, since I'm a, uh, basketball player, so we may chat about some basketball, uh.

✓ We usually chat about daily things such as what has happened during our school time, some very funny things that happened in our classes, or, since I'm a basketball player, we may chat about basketball.

The phrase 'what we have happened' is incorrect; it should be 'what has happened' to indicate events that occurred. 'Laughful' is not a correct adjective; 'funny' is appropriate. The sentence is also simplified for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer you to chat with a group of people because more people means that more opinions you can share about.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because more people means more opinions you can share.

The phrase 'I prefer you to chat' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer to chat'. Also, 'more opinions you can share about' is awkward; 'more opinions you can share' is correct. The pronoun 'you' is used inconsistently and should be aligned with the speaker's perspective.

× They can provide many views, many opinions you made know that how their personality and you can even make a new friends with them.

✓ They can provide many views and opinions so you can get to know their personalities, and you can even make new friends with them.

'Many opinions you made know that how their personality' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'opinions so you can get to know their personalities'. 'A new friends' is incorrect; 'new friends' is plural without 'a'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to communicate via social media than face to face because I in my opinion I think that preferring to communicate through social media can make people not very nervous and can share all the point of views you want to say it.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media rather than face to face because, in my opinion, communicating through social media can make people less nervous and allow them to share all the points of view they want to express.

The phrase 'than face to face' should be 'rather than face to face' for correct comparison. 'I in my opinion I think' is redundant; 'in my opinion' suffices. 'Not very nervous' is better expressed as 'less nervous'. 'Share all the point of views you want to say it' is awkward; 'share all the points of view they want to express' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× They might done something that made me unhappy or say some bad words so I may argue with them in some time.

✓ They might have done something that made me unhappy or said some bad words, so I may argue with them sometimes.

'Might done' is incorrect; it should be 'might have done' to form the present perfect modal. 'Say some bad words' should be 'said some bad words' to maintain past tense consistency. 'In some time' is incorrect; 'sometimes' is the correct adverb.

× But for me I am not a very uh, I do not very argue.

✓ But for me, I am not someone who argues a lot.

The phrase 'I do not very argue' is ungrammatical. 'Argue' is a verb and cannot be modified by 'very' in this way. The sentence is rephrased to express the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.