Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや繰り返しが見られます。より正確な文法を使い、冗長な表現を避けることが重要です。例えば、「today's happened」は不自然なので、「what happened today」などに修正しましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. Talking with my friends helps me feel relaxed. When we share what happened during the day, it makes our conversations fun and exciting.

Sugestão: 内容は伝わりますが、文法と語彙の誤りが多いです。例えば、「combine useful information」は不自然なので、「combined useful information」や「useful information」などに直しましょう。また、文をつなぐ接続詞を使うとより自然になります。

Exemplo: I usually chat with my friends about university life. For example, we often discuss club activities, classes, and homework. These conversations give me useful information and make me enjoy my studies.

Sugestão: 回答は明確で自然ですが、より豊かな語彙や接続詞を使うと良いでしょう。また、具体的な理由や例を加えると説得力が増します。

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows us to share a wide range of information and ideas. For instance, in a group, everyone can contribute different perspectives, which makes the conversation more interesting.

Sugestão: 文法の誤りと繰り返しが目立ちます。例えば、「made me made me to understand」は不自然です。より正確な表現を使い、繰り返しを避けましょう。

Exemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because we can see other people's facial expressions. This helps me understand their feelings more easily.

Sugestão: 文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多いです。例えば、「but and we discuss about it」は不自然なので、「and we discuss it」などに修正しましょう。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけてください。

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends about future plans and opinions. For example, some of my friends want to be entrepreneurs, and we discuss the pros and cons of that choice.

× By talking with friends about today's happened, we can we can feel fun and exciting.

✓ By talking with friends about what happened today, we can feel fun and excited.

The phrase 'today's happened' is incorrect; it should be 'what happened today' to correctly express the event. Also, 'feel fun and exciting' is incorrect because 'fun' is a noun or adjective but not used with 'feel' in this way; 'feel fun' is unnatural. Instead, 'feel fun and excited' or 'feel happy and excited' is appropriate. The repetition 'we can we can' is also an error and should be corrected.

× I usually talk about university with friends.

✓ I usually talk about university life with friends.

The phrase 'talk about university' is vague; adding 'life' clarifies the topic. However, this is more about clarity than grammar. No preposition error here, so this suggestion is optional.

× It is giving me a combine useful information and make me fun.

✓ It gives me combined useful information and makes me happy.

'It is giving me' is awkward; simple present 'gives' is better for habitual actions. 'a combine useful information' is incorrect; 'information' is uncountable and 'combined' is the correct adjective form. 'make me fun' is incorrect; 'fun' is not used to describe a person feeling happy. 'makes me happy' is appropriate.

× This is because by chatting with many people, we can share a lot of information with them.

✓ This is because by chatting with many people, we can share a lot of information.

The phrase 'share a lot of information with them' is redundant because 'with many people' already indicates the recipients. Removing 'with them' improves clarity and correctness.

× I'd like to communicate face to face.

✓ I'd like to communicate face-to-face.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adverbial phrase modifying 'communicate'.

× This is because we can see the other people's face facial expressions.

✓ This is because we can see other people's facial expressions.

'the other people's face facial expressions' is redundant and incorrect. 'Other people's facial expressions' is correct.

× Facial expression made me made me to understand how people feel easily.

✓ Facial expressions help me understand how people feel easily.

'made me made me to understand' is repetitive and incorrect. 'help me understand' is the correct expression. Also, 'facial expression' should be plural 'facial expressions'.

× Yes I do I I do with friends about future plans and their opinions.

✓ Yes, I do. I argue with friends about future plans and their opinions.

The original sentence is repetitive and lacks clarity. Adding 'argue' clarifies the action. Also, punctuation is needed to separate ideas.

× My friends want to be an entrepreneur but and we discuss about it.

✓ My friends want to be entrepreneurs, and we discuss it.

'but and' is incorrect conjunction usage; only one conjunction is needed. Also, 'discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not require 'about'. 'Entrepreneur' should be plural 'entrepreneurs' to match 'friends'.