Part 1
Examinador
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidato
Of course, I really enjoy, enjoy to talk to my friends. Uh, we can uh, talk to many things, uh, especially with my besties who are uh, pretty nice and have many common top topics with me.
Examinador
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidato
Like in the past few days, what we have been through and what happened to us in some special things that we experience and, uh, many daily things like, uh, something, I don't know.
Examinador
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidato
Uh, I prefer to chat with only one friend or two, not with many people because, uh, I'm not a person that, who can, who can, uh, get along with everyone. I'm, yeah.
Examinador
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidato
Umm, I prefer to communicate face to face, uh, because, umm, uh, when I feel comfortable with uh, one of my friends, uh, I feel like it's better communicate face to face. It would be so much fun.
Examinador
Do you argue with friends?
Candidato
Of course, umm, since we have, uh, different ideas, different opinions on some topics, so that we, uh, indeed, so we do have argue with each other, but it's totally fine.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中存在重复和语法错误,表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用更准确的表达。
Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because we share many common interests and have interesting conversations.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答内容模糊且不具体,缺乏连贯性。建议提供具体话题,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Exemplo: Recently, we usually talk about our recent experiences, special events, and daily life activities, which helps us stay connected.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中有较多犹豫和重复,表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地表达观点,并避免重复。
Exemplo: I prefer chatting with one or two close friends because I find it easier to have meaningful conversations that way.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中有过多填充词,影响流畅度。建议减少犹豫词,使用更自然的表达。
Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and enjoyable when talking with close friends.
Do you argue with friends?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和重复,表达不够清晰。建议简洁表达原因,并使用连贯的句子。
Exemplo: Yes, we sometimes argue because we have different opinions, but it's normal and helps us understand each other better.
× I really enjoy, enjoy to talk to my friends.
✓ I really enjoy talking to my friends.
动词enjoy后应接动名词形式(动词+ing),而不是不定式to talk。
× we can uh, talk to many things
✓ we can uh, talk about many things
动词talk后应接介词about表示谈论某事,而不是to。
× especially with my besties who are uh, pretty nice and have many common top topics with me.
✓ especially with my besties who are uh, pretty nice and have many common topics with me.
common topics是固定搭配,top topics不合适。
× Like in the past few days, what we have been through and what happened to us in some special things that we experience
✓ Like in the past few days, what we have been through and what happened to us in some special things that we experienced
句中描述过去发生的事情,动词experience应使用过去式experienced。
× I prefer to communicate face to face
✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face
face-to-face作为副词短语,需用连字符连接。
× so that we, uh, indeed, so we do have argue with each other
✓ so we do argue with each other
句子结构混乱,去掉多余词语,使句子通顺。
× we do have argue with each other
✓ we do have arguing with each other
动词have后接动名词形式arguing更合适,或者直接用do argue。