Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Use a clear topic sentence and concise supporting details. For example, avoid repeating words like 'after all my class classes' and ensure subject-verb agreement.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially after classes. Usually, we go to a cafe or restaurant and talk about our daily lives.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated words. Also, correct subject-verb agreement and plural forms.

Exemplo: We usually chat about our daily events. Since we are all seniors at university, we take different classes and some of us are doing internships, so there is always something interesting to discuss.

Sugestão: Work on fluency and avoid repetition. Use clearer linking words and more natural expressions. Also, correct minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing.

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. If I want to discuss something serious, I prefer talking to one friend. However, if I want to have fun or share joyful memories, I enjoy chatting with a group.

Sugestão: Avoid vague phrases like 'some kind of like factors' and unclear expressions such as 'lead the loom'. Use precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structures to express your ideas effectively.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because social media lacks non-verbal cues like body language, which are important for understanding. Meeting in person makes communication easier and more effective.

Sugestão: Try to use more varied vocabulary and avoid redundancy such as 'really, really well'. Also, provide a bit more detail to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends, but it's usually about trivial things like deciding what to eat. These disagreements are lighthearted and usually end on a positive note.

× All my after all my class classes are over, I'd like to go to some kind of cafe or restaurant with my friends and chatting with them about the our daily life.

✓ After all my classes are over, I'd like to go to some kind of cafe or restaurant with my friends and chat with them about our daily life.

The word 'class' should be plural 'classes' to match 'all my'. Also, 'chatting' should be changed to 'chat' to maintain parallel structure with 'go'. The phrase 'the our daily life' is incorrect; 'the' should be removed to say 'our daily life'.

× We are all senior at university, so we are taking a different kind of classes and even some, some of them is taking is doing internship.

✓ We are all seniors at university, so we are taking different kinds of classes and some of them are doing internships.

The word 'senior' should be plural 'seniors' to agree with 'we'. 'A different kind of classes' is incorrect; it should be 'different kinds of classes' to match plural 'classes'. 'Some of them is taking is doing internship' has multiple errors: 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural 'some of them', and 'doing internship' should be plural 'doing internships' to match plural subject.

× It maybe depends on situation.

✓ It maybe depends on the situation.

The phrase 'on situation' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'situation'.

× It maybe depends on situation.

✓ It may depend on the situation.

The phrase 'maybe depends' is incorrect; 'maybe' is an adverb meaning 'perhaps', but here the modal verb 'may' is needed to express possibility. Also, 'the' is needed before 'situation'.

× When I want to talk about some serious thing, I prefer talking with only one only one friend rather than group talk.

✓ When I want to talk about some serious things, I prefer talking with only one friend rather than group talk.

'Some serious thing' should be plural 'some serious things' to sound natural. Also, 'only one' is repeated unnecessarily; it should appear once.

× But if I want to join some kinds of like very joyful memories or I just want to have fun, I later like to be with a lot of people.

✓ But if I want to join some kinds of very joyful memories or I just want to have fun, I later like to be with a lot of people.

The phrase 'some kinds of like very joyful memories' contains an unnecessary filler word 'like' which should be removed for clarity.

× Obviously face to face is a much better way because when you communicate in social media, sometimes you can miss some kind of like factors that included in their body language or those things.

✓ Obviously face to face is a much better way because when you communicate via social media, sometimes you can miss some factors that are included in their body language or those things.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'social media'; 'via' or 'on' is appropriate. Also, 'some kind of like factors' is awkward; 'some factors' is clearer. 'That included' should be 'that are included' to form correct relative clause.

× But when I meet them in face to face, it's much easier to lead the loom and communicate much better.

✓ But when I meet them face to face, it's much easier to read the room and communicate much better.

The phrase 'in face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'face to face' without 'in'. Also, 'lead the loom' is a mishearing or typo; the correct idiom is 'read the room' meaning to understand the social situation.