Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but try to avoid minor grammatical errors and improve fluency by using smoother phrasing. Also, avoid redundancy such as repeating 'feel' twice in one sentence. Try to use linking words to connect ideas more naturally.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me feel relaxed and supported. For instance, whenever I face a problem at work, I immediately call a friend to get her opinion and advice.

Sugestão: Your answer covers a good range of topics but contains filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' which affect fluency. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar, for example, 'negative issues happen' should be 'negative issues that happen'. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I usually chat about a variety of topics. For example, we share interesting and funny stories from our daily lives. Additionally, we discuss our plans for the weekend or future goals, as well as any problems we might be facing.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains incomplete sentences and filler words. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid incomplete thoughts. Also, use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: To be honest, I prefer one-on-one conversations because I feel calmer and can express myself more clearly. In contrast, group chats often make me feel disconnected and less comfortable.

Sugestão: Your answer conveys your preference well but contains filler words and awkward phrasing like 'talk crystal face'. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid fillers. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: If possible, I prefer face-to-face communication rather than video calls because it allows me to feel warmth and physical presence. This helps me understand emotions better than communicating through social media.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant with good reasoning. To improve, try to use more natural phrasing such as 'I prefer harmonious and peaceful conversations' instead of 'harmony based'. Also, avoid redundancy and use linking words to enhance coherence.

Exemplo: No, I usually avoid arguing with my friends. I prefer harmonious and peaceful conversations because they make us feel comfortable and happy. Life is already challenging, so arguing over trivial matters is not helpful.

× when I have a negative issue happening in at work

✓ when I have a negative issue happening at work

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used before 'at work'. The correct preposition is 'at' when referring to a workplace location. This is a preposition usage error, but it affects the phrase's correctness related to singular/plural context of 'issue'. The phrase 'in at work' is incorrect; it should be 'at work'.

× negative issues happen

✓ negative issues happening

The phrase 'negative issues happen' is grammatically awkward here. The correct form is 'negative issues happening' to indicate ongoing or current events. This is related to verb form usage but also affects the plural noun 'issues' and its verb agreement.

× I'm much more comfortable when I'm talking to a friends

✓ I'm much more comfortable when I'm talking to a friend

The noun 'friends' is plural but preceded by the singular article 'a', which is incorrect. The correct form is 'a friend' to match the singular article. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× in a crowded I feel so disconnected and.

✓ in a crowd I feel so disconnected.

The phrase 'in a crowded' is incorrect because 'crowded' is an adjective, not a noun. The correct noun is 'crowd'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' which is incomplete. The corrected sentence removes 'and' and uses 'crowd' properly.