Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, for example, avoid repeating 'sharing' and improve sentence structure for natural flow.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel comfortable and happy. I like sharing my opinions and daily experiences with my best friend.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks grammatical accuracy and is incomplete. Use linking words to connect ideas and complete your thoughts. Also, avoid filler words like 'umm' and be specific about topics.

Exemplo: I usually talk about interesting things that happen at school and share any stressful situations with my friend, hoping to get some advice from her.

Sugestão: There are some pronunciation and grammatical errors, and repetition of words. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' correctly to improve coherence. Also, clarify your ideas with better vocabulary.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with only one friend, especially my best friend, because I can share my deep feelings, such as stress and anxiety. However, I find it difficult to do that in a group.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to compare options clearly. Avoid awkward phrasing and be specific about your reasons.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to express my true feelings. Although social media lets me send messages and voice notes, I can't see my friend's real expressions, which is important to me.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete with many errors. Focus on giving a clear, direct response and explain your reasons with proper grammar and vocabulary. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: No, I don't argue with my friends because I believe in good communication. Even when we have different opinions, we try to understand each other and avoid conflicts.

× Yes I do, I like chatting with friends because that I can feel comfortable and feel happiness while sharing my own opinion and sharing my daily living to my best friend.

✓ Yes I do, I like chatting with friends because I can feel comfortable and happy while sharing my own opinion and my daily life with my best friend.

The phrase 'because that' is incorrect; 'because' alone is sufficient to introduce the reason. Also, 'feel happiness' should be 'feel happy' to use the correct adjective form. 'Sharing my daily living' is awkward; 'sharing my daily life' is more natural. Additionally, 'sharing ... to my best friend' should be 'sharing ... with my best friend' because 'share' is followed by 'with' when indicating the person involved.

× I'm usually share my daily life which is something interesting to my friend such as umm something interesting in my school and my stressful thing to her and I hope I can get some advice from her and.

✓ I usually share my daily life, which includes interesting things, with my friend, such as something interesting at my school and my stressful experiences, and I hope I can get some advice from her.

The phrase 'I'm usually share' is incorrect; it should be 'I usually share' because 'usually' indicates a habitual action and does not require the present continuous tense. Also, 'which is something interesting to my friend' is awkward; it is better to say 'which includes interesting things'. 'Something interesting in my school' should be 'something interesting at my school'. 'My stressful thing to her' is unclear; 'my stressful experiences' is clearer. The sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity.

× I prefer to check with only one friend, that's my best friend because I think that I can share share my deep thing to her, like my stressful thing and also what I feel anxious, but however when I'm chatting with a group I can't do that.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend, my best friend, because I think I can share my deep feelings with her, like my stressful experiences and also what makes me anxious, but when I'm chatting with a group, I can't do that.

The word 'check' is incorrect; it should be 'chat'. The phrase 'share share my deep thing to her' is incorrect; it should be 'share my deep feelings with her'. 'What I feel anxious' is incorrect; it should be 'what makes me anxious'. The conjunction 'but however' is redundant; use either 'but' or 'however' alone. Also, commas are needed for clarity.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I think that can express my real feeling to her and I think about social media can also typing the message and send the voice message, but I can't see the real face of my friend that I think is.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I think that can express my real feelings to her. I think social media can also be used to type messages and send voice messages, but I can't see my friend's real face, which I think is important.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective, but as an adverb it is acceptable. 'Express my real feeling to her' should be 'express my real feelings to her' for plural agreement. 'I think about social media can also typing the message' is incorrect; it should be 'I think social media can also be used to type messages'. 'Send the voice message' should be 'send voice messages' for generality. The last part is incomplete and unclear; it was rephrased for clarity.

× No I don't because I'm thin, I'm strengthened on communicate with my friends and umm dude of the problem that we met before like umm different opinion OPS umm opposite advice that we.

✓ No, I don't because I'm confident in communicating with my friends and about the problems we have faced before, like different opinions or opposite advice.

The phrase 'I'm thin' is incorrect and likely a mishearing; 'I'm confident' fits better. 'I'm strengthened on communicate' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm confident in communicating'. 'Dude of the problem' is incorrect; likely meant 'about the problems'. 'OPS' is unclear and removed. The sentence was incomplete and restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.