Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Try to make your response more concise and correct the grammar, especially verb tenses and sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea multiple times.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially during study breaks. Being around them makes me feel confident, and we often talk about life, our plans, and daily activities.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but lacks fluency and contains some grammatical mistakes. Use clearer linking words and improve sentence structure to make your answer more coherent. Also, provide more specific examples to enrich your response.

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. For instance, during breaks, we usually discuss what to eat or our next class. However, in group chats, we mainly talk about academic subjects.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear due to grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to organize your ideas more clearly and use correct verb forms. Also, directly state your preference and explain it with supporting details.

Exemplo: That's a difficult question. Although I prefer chatting with one friend for a more personal conversation, my tourism major requires me to discuss with many people, so I often end up chatting in groups.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear expressions and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly and avoid irrelevant or unclear comments. Use simple and direct language to explain your preference with reasons.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I find social media interactions uncomfortable and unnatural. Talking in person allows for better understanding and connection.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and smoother sentence structures. Also, explain briefly why arguing can be beneficial.

Exemplo: Yes, I often argue with my friends and classmates, especially about academic topics. Our teacher encourages us to debate ideas to improve our understanding, so I see arguing as a positive part of learning.

× Of course I like chatting with my friends, specially during a study time, because when we when I were around my friends, I feel full of myself and I love chatting with them about everything life, how's it going and how are we gonna eat.

✓ Of course I like chatting with my friends, especially during study time, because when I am around my friends, I feel confident and I love chatting with them about everything in life, how's it going and how we are going to eat.

The word 'specially' is incorrectly used; the correct adverb is 'especially' to indicate emphasis. 'During a study time' is incorrect; 'during study time' is more natural. 'When we when I were' is a repetition and incorrect tense; it should be 'when I am' to match present tense. 'Feel full of myself' is an idiomatic error; 'feel confident' is clearer. 'How are we gonna eat' is informal and grammatically incorrect; 'how we are going to eat' is correct.

× For example, when we were in our break we probably talk about what to eat or what is the next subject and that is all.

✓ For example, when we were on our break, we probably talked about what to eat or what the next subject was, and that was all.

The phrase 'in our break' should be 'on our break' as the correct preposition. 'We probably talk' is present tense but the context is past; it should be 'we probably talked'. 'What is the next subject' should be in past tense 'what the next subject was'. 'That is all' should be 'that was all' to maintain past tense consistency.

× And if we are in a group chat we will always talk about subjects.

✓ And if we are in a group chat, we always talk about subjects.

The use of 'will always talk' is future tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so present simple 'always talk' is appropriate.

× Oh that question is a tough one because my major is tourism so I often have to discuss with so many people so I don't really have a time to just only with my friends.

✓ Oh, that question is a tough one because my major is tourism, so I often have to discuss with many people and I don't really have time to be just with my friends.

The phrase 'so many people' is correct but 'have a time' is incorrect; it should be 'have time' without an article. 'Just only with my friends' is awkward; 'be just with my friends' is clearer.

× So I think I even though I prefer chat with my friend, I ended up with group of people.

✓ So I think even though I prefer to chat with my friend, I end up with a group of people.

The phrase 'I even though I prefer chat' is ungrammatical; it should be 'even though I prefer to chat'. 'I ended up' is past tense but the context is present habitual, so 'I end up' is correct. 'Group of people' needs an article 'a'.

× My friend once told me that I am so old I have a so old personality because old people like millenniums are allowed to talk to community piece to piece and I am like this.

✓ My friend once told me that I am so old, I have such an old personality because old people like millennials are allowed to talk to the community piece by piece and I am like this.

'A so old personality' is incorrect; it should be 'such an old personality'. 'Millenniums' is incorrect plural; the correct term is 'millennials'. 'Talk to community piece to piece' is incorrect; it should be 'talk to the community piece by piece'.

× And I don't prefer via social media because that feels so uncomfortable and so odd.

✓ And I don't prefer communicating via social media because it feels so uncomfortable and odd.

'I don't prefer via social media' is incorrect; the verb 'prefer' should be followed by a gerund or noun phrase, so 'prefer communicating via social media' is correct. 'That feels' is vague; 'it feels' is clearer.

× My teacher always tells tell about that we should have to argue with academically so that we can improve our knowledge and it is a part of our job.

✓ My teacher always tells us that we should argue academically so that we can improve our knowledge and it is a part of our job.

'Tells tell about that' is incorrect; it should be 'tells us that'. 'Should have to argue with academically' is incorrect; 'should argue academically' is correct.