Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and repetitions. Try to give a direct and natural response with clear structure and avoid filler words. For example, start with a clear statement about your liking for chatting, then explain why or when you chat with friends.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when I have questions or need advice. I usually send them messages to discuss any doubts or share my opinions.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more coherent and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, specify who 'her' and 'they' refer to for clarity.

Exemplo: I usually chat with my friends about the art I create and post on social media. I ask for their opinions and suggestions on how to improve it, and they share their honest thoughts with me.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct grammar and explain your preference clearly with reasons and linking words.

Exemplo: I generally prefer chatting with one friend because group conversations can be noisy and confusing. I find it easier to focus and have meaningful discussions one-on-one.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct sentence structures and provide clear reasons for your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer communicating via social media because I am an introvert and feel more comfortable messaging friends on platforms like Instagram, WhatsApp, and Telegram rather than talking face-to-face.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically, explaining when and why you might argue with friends.

Exemplo: I don't argue with my friends very often, but sometimes I do when I strongly believe my opinion is correct and want to explain my point of view.

× I did say I gingerly like chatting with my friends.

✓ I did say I generally like chatting with my friends.

The adverb 'gingerly' is incorrectly used here; the intended meaning is likely 'generally'. Using the correct adverb improves clarity and meaning.

× If I have any any doubts and any questions or or something else I just send a message to my friend and I also opinion MMM.

✓ If I have any doubts or questions or something else, I just send a message to my friend and also ask for their opinion.

The sentence has repeated words and unclear phrasing. 'I also opinion MMM' is incorrect; it should be 'ask for their opinion' to make sense. Also, 'any any' and 'or or' are repetitions and should be corrected.

× I just joke about the the art that I have made and posted on social media.

✓ I just joke about the art that I have made and posted on social media.

The definite article 'the' is repeated unnecessarily. Removing the duplicate improves sentence correctness.

× I will ask her opinions and how to improve it.

✓ I will ask for her opinions and how to improve it.

The verb 'ask' requires the preposition 'for' when requesting opinions. Adding 'for' corrects the sentence.

× They will share their thoughts, what they think about it.

✓ They will share their thoughts about what they think of it.

The sentence structure is awkward. Adding 'about' and rephrasing improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× That will makes us irritating.

✓ That will make us irritated.

'Makes' should be 'make' to agree with 'will' (modal verb). Also, 'irritating' (causing irritation) should be 'irritated' (feeling irritation) to express the intended meaning.

× I don't think every people will take.

✓ I don't think every person will talk.

'Every people' is incorrect; 'people' is plural, so 'every' should be followed by a singular noun like 'person'. Also, 'take' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'talk'.

× I did say I changed our life, prefer communicate in social media because I'm an introvert person who don't like to talk face to face.

✓ I did say I have changed my life; I prefer to communicate on social media because I'm an introvert who doesn't like to talk face to face.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and missing modal verbs. 'Changed our life' should be 'have changed my life' for present perfect tense. 'Prefer communicate' should be 'prefer to communicate'. 'Who don't like' should be 'who doesn't like' to agree with singular subject.

× I just like to message them on social media like Instagram, WhatsApp, Telegram and so.

✓ I just like to message them on social media platforms like Instagram, WhatsApp, Telegram, and so on.

Adding 'platforms' clarifies the meaning. 'And so' is incomplete; 'and so on' is the correct phrase.

× I don't argue with my friends often, but sometimes somehow I like to work to.

✓ I don't argue with my friends often, but sometimes I do like to argue too.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'Work to' is incorrect; likely intended 'argue too'. Rephrasing improves clarity.

× When my side is my side of opinion is correct, when others are strong.

✓ When I believe my opinion is correct, but others are strong in theirs.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rewriting it to express the intended meaning clearly improves grammatical correctness.