Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because they live far away, making it hard to meet in person. Therefore, I mostly communicate with them online.

Sugestão: Be more specific and organize your answer using linking words to list topics clearly. Avoid repetition and improve grammar.

Exemplo: Usually, I chat about various topics such as studies, news, music, and sports, depending on what comes to mind for me or my friends.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and sentence clarity. Use linking words to contrast preferences and explain reasons more clearly.

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. I enjoy chatting with a group because it's more fun and we can share many ideas. However, I also like talking one-on-one with a friend for a more personal conversation.

Sugestão: Work on sentence structure and clarity. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain preferences clearly.

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. If my friends are busy, I prefer to communicate via social media. However, I enjoy face-to-face conversations when my friends visit me from far away.

Sugestão: Avoid informal language and unclear phrases. Clarify your meaning and use proper grammar. Explain the nature of arguments more clearly and politely.

Exemplo: Yes, I often argue with my friends, but I find it interesting and fun. Moreover, I always argue in a friendly way so that no one feels hurt or offended.

× my friends live far away from my house so it is sometimes difficult for me to meet them physically so maximum time I chat with them online.

✓ my friends live far away from my house so it is sometimes difficult for me to meet them physically so most of the time I chat with them online.

The phrase 'maximum time' is incorrect when referring to frequency. The correct quantifier is 'most of the time' to indicate the majority of occasions.

× Usually I chat about any random topic that comes to my mind or that come to my friend's mind.

✓ Usually I chat about any random topic that comes to my mind or that comes to my friends' minds.

The verb must agree with the plural subject 'friends' so 'come' should be 'comes' for singular or 'come' for plural. Also, 'friend's mind' should be plural possessive 'friends' minds' to match plural friends.

× It can be either about the study, it can be either about the news, it can be there about music, sports, anything.

✓ It can be about study, news, music, sports, or anything.

The phrase 'it can be there about' is incorrect. Also, 'the study' and 'the news' are incorrect here; 'study' and 'news' are uncountable and do not need 'the' in this context. The sentence is simplified for clarity and correctness.

× It depend on the situation, if there are a lot of friend available to chat then we can I can share with the group of people and while chatting with a group of people I found out that it's more enjoyable and we can share more ideas when there are a lot of people.

✓ It depends on the situation. If there are a lot of friends available to chat, then I can share with the group of people. While chatting with a group of people, I find it more enjoyable and we can share more ideas when there are many people.

The verb 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with singular subject 'It'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'a lot of'. 'Found out' is past tense but the context is present, so 'find' is correct. Also, 'a lot of people' is better replaced with 'many people' for variety.

× But when there is only one friend it is I also enjoy.

✓ But when there is only one friend, I also enjoy it.

The sentence structure is awkward and missing the object 'it' after 'enjoy'. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× Also, it depends on the situation, if my friends are not available or they're busy then I would prefer to chat in true social social media and apart from that when I would love to communicate face to face sometimes when my when my friends come from a long way to meet with me so that.

✓ Also, it depends on the situation. If my friends are not available or they're busy, then I would prefer to chat through social media. Apart from that, I would love to communicate face to face sometimes when my friends come from far away to meet me.

The phrase 'chat in true social social media' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'through social media'. 'Come from a long way' should be 'come from far away'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Yeah like almost every time I argue with my friends and I found it more interesting and more fun on it.

✓ Yeah, I argue with my friends almost every time, and I find it more interesting and more fun.

The verb 'found' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'find'. The phrase 'more fun on it' is incorrect and removed for clarity.

× And apart from that I argue with them in a more friendly and friend friendly way so that they don't get hard or they don't mind on my ish on my talking.

✓ Apart from that, I argue with them in a friendly way so that they don't get hurt or mind my way of talking.

The phrase 'more friendly and friend friendly' is redundant and incorrect; 'friendly' suffices. 'Don't get hard' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'don't get hurt'. 'Mind on my ish on my talking' is unclear and corrected to 'mind my way of talking' for clarity.