Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้องและใช้คำกริยาในรูปแบบที่เหมาะสม เช่น ใช้ 'chatting' เป็นคำนามหรือใช้ 'chat' เป็นกริยา และลดความซ้ำซ้อนในประโยคเพื่อให้คำตอบดูเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น

Exemplo: Definitely, I like chatting with friends because it helps us stay close and share good moments together.

Sugestão: ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดให้ลื่นไหลและใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'impressed moment' ควรเปลี่ยนเป็น 'impressive moment' และอธิบายรายละเอียดให้ชัดเจนขึ้น

Exemplo: I usually chat about random things in our lives, such as how I cooked dinner, the beautiful sky today, the weather, or any impressive moments I have experienced.

Sugestão: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์และชัดเจน เช่น 'introvert person' ควรเป็น 'an introverted person' และใช้คำเชื่อม 'because' เพื่ออธิบายเหตุผล

Exemplo: As an introverted person, I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows me to discuss personal issues and have deeper conversations.

Sugestão: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้คำซ้ำและไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'the the other person in real face' ควรเป็น 'the other person’s real face' และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค

Exemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see the other person's real facial expressions, and having eye contact makes the conversation more meaningful.

Sugestão: ควรใช้คำศัพท์และโครงสร้างประโยคที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'not a good fan' ควรเปลี่ยนเป็น 'not a fan of arguing' และลดความซ้ำซ้อนของคำ เช่น 'much so much'

Exemplo: I'm not a fan of arguing because we usually discuss things rationally, so we rarely have chances to argue with each other.

× Definitely I would like to Chatting with friends is the way that we can stay close to each other and update our life, and sometimes sharing a good moment together.

✓ Definitely I would like to chat with friends because it is the way that we can stay close to each other and update our lives, and sometimes share good moments together.

The verb 'chatting' is incorrectly used after 'would like to'; it should be the base form 'chat'. Also, 'sharing' should be 'share' to maintain parallel structure. 'Life' should be plural 'lives' to refer to multiple people. Use base form verbs after modal verbs like 'would like to'.

× I usually chat about random things in our life, like how I cook the food for dinner, or some special moment like today's sky or the weather or some impressed moment that I face off.

✓ I usually chat about random things in our lives, like how I cook food for dinner, or some special moments like today's sky or the weather, or some impressive moments that I face.

Use 'in our lives' instead of 'in our life' to match plural subjects. 'The food' is unnecessary; 'cook food' is more natural. 'Some impressed moment' is incorrect; 'impressed' is an adjective describing a feeling, but here 'impressive' is correct. 'Face off' is incorrect; 'face' is sufficient. Also, pluralize 'moment' to 'moments' to match the context.

× As introvert person, I prefer to chat with only one friend instead of group of people.

✓ As an introverted person, I prefer to chat with only one friend instead of a group of people.

Add the article 'an' before 'introverted person'. 'Introvert' should be 'introverted' as an adjective. Also, 'group of people' needs the article 'a' before it.

× In that way I think I can approach to that person issue and can somehow get some deep talk to them.

✓ In that way, I think I can approach that person's issues and somehow have a deep talk with them.

The verb 'approach' does not require the preposition 'to'. 'Person issue' should be possessive 'person's issues'. 'Get some deep talk to them' is unnatural; 'have a deep talk with them' is correct.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because you can see the the other person in real face how they express feeling on their face and I love when we talk to something and have eye contact to each other, it make conversation more meaningful.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because you can see the other person’s real face and how they express feelings on their face. I love when we talk about something and have eye contact with each other; it makes the conversation more meaningful.

'Face to face' is correct without 'the'. 'In real face' should be 'real face'. 'Express feeling' should be plural 'express feelings'. 'Talk to something' should be 'talk about something'. 'Eye contact to each other' should be 'eye contact with each other'. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× I'm not a good fan actually because we always talk with the reason, so we don't have much so much chance to argue with each other.

✓ I'm not a big fan of arguing actually because we always talk reasonably, so we don't have many chances to argue with each other.

'Good fan' is incorrect; 'big fan' is the correct expression. 'Talk with the reason' is unnatural; 'talk reasonably' or 'talk things through' is better. 'Much so much chance' is redundant; use 'many chances' for countable nouns. Modal verb usage is implied in 'don't have many chances'.