Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but contains some language errors and redundancy. Try to use correct vocabulary ('chatting' instead of 'cheating') and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid repeating ideas and use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because they help improve my mood and make me feel more relaxed after a long day. For example, when I feel stressed or overwhelmed, my friends cheer me up and help me calm down.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be specific about the topics you discuss.

Exemplo: Well, I usually talk about my work experiences or memorable events with my friends. Sometimes, I also listen to their stories and enjoy some encouraging pep talks.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some language errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and singular/plural agreement. Also, try to make your sentences more concise and natural.

Exemplo: I prefer to chat with only one friend because if I want to talk about something important, I would rather share it with a close friend than tell everyone.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but the grammar and sentence structure need improvement. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'first' and 'second' properly to organize your points.

Exemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face rather than using social media. First, I feel uncomfortable sharing my personal thoughts online. Second, talking on social media feels impersonal, like speaking to a machine.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct sentence structures. Explain your point about discussing rather than arguing in a simple and coherent way.

Exemplo: I don't usually argue with my friends; instead, we have discussions where we share our thoughts and ideas openly.

× Yes, I really love cheating with my friends because my friends can't help me to improve my mood and make me feel more relaxed after a long day.

✓ Yes, I really love chatting with my friends because my friends can help me to improve my mood and make me feel more relaxed after a long day.

The word 'cheating' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'chatting' which is the present participle form used to describe the action of talking informally. Also, 'can't help me' should be 'can help me' to express the positive effect of friends on mood.

× For instance, when I share with when I feel stressful or overwhelming then my friend they will help me to cheer me up I calm down.

✓ For instance, when I share with my friends that I feel stressed or overwhelmed, they help to cheer me up and calm me down.

The sentence has redundant and incorrect conjunctions and pronouns. 'When I share with when' is incorrect; it should be 'when I share with my friends'. Also, 'stressful or overwhelming' should be 'stressed or overwhelmed' to describe feelings. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Well, I usually share my working experience or some unusual remembrance to share my friends or just to listen some kind of their experience.

✓ Well, I usually share my work experience or some unusual memories with my friends or just listen to some of their experiences.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used; it should be 'with' when sharing with someone. 'Remembrance' is incorrect here; 'memories' is the correct noun. Also, 'listen some kind of their experience' should be 'listen to some of their experiences' for correct verb-preposition usage.

× I just want or just want them to some pep talk to.

✓ I just want, or just want them to give me some pep talk too.

The sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. 'To some pep talk to' is incorrect; it should be 'to give me some pep talk too'. The conjunction 'or' is unnecessary here and the sentence is clarified for meaning.

× I prefer to check with only one friends because I think if I want to talk about something in the world, I would love to share with one of my closest friends rather than to tell everybody in the world.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think if I want to talk about something in the world, I would love to share with one of my closest friends rather than tell everybody in the world.

The word 'check' is a typo and should be 'chat'. 'One friends' is incorrect; 'one friend' is singular. Also, 'rather than to tell' should be 'rather than tell' for correct infinitive usage.

× I prefer to communications face to face rather than using social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than use social media.

'Communications' is a noun but here the verb 'communicate' is needed. Also, 'rather than using' should be 'rather than use' to maintain parallel verb forms.

× First, I'm not very I'm I feel uncomfortable to share my personal thoughts on social media.

✓ First, I'm not very comfortable sharing my personal thoughts on social media.

The sentence has redundant and incorrect phrases 'I'm not very I'm I feel'. It should be simplified to 'I'm not very comfortable'. Also, 'to share' should be 'sharing' after 'comfortable'.

× And then the second, I think using social media just like I'm talking to a machine.

✓ Secondly, I think using social media is just like talking to a machine.

'And then the second' is awkward; 'Secondly' is better. The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'using social media'. Also, 'I'm talking' should be 'talking' to maintain parallel structure.

× I won't say that is argue, I will say this is discussed with my friends because afterward can share their what come their thinking, their ideas, which is the main points that were shared and talked to our friends.

✓ I wouldn't say that I argue; I would say I discuss with my friends because afterwards we can share our thoughts, ideas, which are the main points shared and talked about with our friends.

'That is argue' is incorrect; it should be 'that I argue'. 'This is discussed' should be 'I discuss'. 'Afterward can share their what come their thinking' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'afterwards we can share our thoughts'. Also, 'were shared and talked to' should be 'shared and talked about' for correct preposition use.