Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词有些错误，且句子较长且重复。建议简化句子结构，注意动词时态和单复数形式，避免重复表达。

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relieve stress. For instance, when I feel upset, I talk to my close friends who provide emotional support and make me feel better.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议直接回答问题，使用正确的时态和完整的句子，并且避免重复。

Exemplo: We usually talk about our work and career plans after graduation. Since our jobs can be stressful, we share our feelings and support each other.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达偏好，使用正确的语法，并补充完整的理由。

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend because I feel more comfortable sharing private things with someone I trust, unlike in large groups where I may not know everyone well.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和不完整的句子。建议简洁表达观点，注意句子完整性，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see facial expressions and body language, which help me understand the meaning better and avoid misunderstandings compared to social media.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且表达不清。建议完整表达观点，使用正确的语法，并提供具体且完整的例子。

Exemplo: Yes, arguments are hard to avoid because people have different opinions. For example, once my friend and I ordered the same coffee; she didn't like it, but I thought it was quite good.

× I really enjoy chatting with my friend.

✓ I really enjoy chatting with my friends.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because chatting usually involves more than one friend, and the context implies multiple friends.

× who can gives me some emotional support

✓ who can give me some emotional support

After modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb 'give' should be used, not 'gives'.

× and this also relieve my emotion and strengthen my friends.

✓ and this also relieves my emotions and strengthens my friendships.

The verbs 'relieve' and 'strengthen' need to agree with the singular subject 'this', so they should be 'relieves' and 'strengthens'. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' and 'my friends' should be 'my friendships' to make sense.

× Well, what we usually chat with each other is about to work after we graduating from schools.

✓ Well, what we usually chat about with each other is work after we graduate from school.

The phrase 'chat with each other is about to work' is incorrect. It should be 'chat about with each other is work'. Also, 'graduating' should be 'graduate' to match the tense, and 'schools' should be singular 'school'.

× after we graduating from schools.

✓ after we graduate from school.

'Graduating' is a present participle and incorrect here; the simple present 'graduate' is needed after 'after we' to indicate future event.

× We all we all devote ourselves into careers,

✓ We all devote ourselves to our careers,

The phrase 'devote ourselves into careers' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to', and 'our careers' is more natural.

× sometimes we'll feel stressful and depressed.

✓ sometimes we feel stressed and depressed.

'Stressful' describes something causing stress, but here the feeling is 'stressed'. Also, 'we'll' (we will) is future tense, but the context is habitual, so simple present 'we feel' is correct.

× Then we will talk with each other to find some support and.

✓ Then we will talk with each other to find some support.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' It should end after 'support' to be complete.

× because in some group they are huge people, someone you don't familiar with,

✓ because in some groups there are many people, some of whom you are not familiar with,

'Group' should be plural 'groups' to match 'some'. 'Huge people' is incorrect; 'many people' is appropriate. 'Someone you don't familiar with' should be 'some of whom you are not familiar with'.

× someone you don't familiar with,

✓ someone you are not familiar with,

'Don't familiar' is incorrect; the correct form is 'are not familiar'.

× In converse, I trust one person I I choose one person I trust is the.

✓ In contrast, I trust one person. The one I choose to trust is the...

The sentence is incomplete and has repetition 'I I'. 'In converse' is incorrect; 'In contrast' is appropriate.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see the other facial expressions and the body languages

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see the other person's facial expressions and body language

'Face to face' should be hyphenated 'face-to-face'. 'The other facial expressions' should be 'the other person's facial expressions'. 'Body languages' is uncountable and should be 'body language'.

× and and those can help me to understand other words or other meanings more clearly and less mistakes.

✓ and those can help me understand other words or meanings more clearly and make fewer mistakes.

Repeated 'and and' is an error. 'Help me to understand' can be 'help me understand'. 'Other meanings' is sufficient without 'other words or other meanings'. 'Less mistakes' should be 'fewer mistakes' because 'mistakes' are countable.

× You know, talk on social media you may.

✓ You know, when you talk on social media, you may make mistakes.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb. Adding 'make mistakes' completes the thought.

× Yeah, I think argument is very hard to avoid because you and others always have different aspects from one thing.

✓ Yeah, I think arguments are very hard to avoid because you and others always have different perspectives on one thing.

'Argument' should be plural 'arguments'. 'Different aspects from one thing' is incorrect; 'different perspectives on one thing' is correct.

× For example, last time my friend and I went to the coffee shop, we ordered the same coffee.

✓ For example, last time my friend and I went to the coffee shop, we ordered the same coffee.

This sentence is correct in past tense; no correction needed.

× She thought it's very it's not good, but I think it's quite.

✓ She thought it was not very good, but I think it was quite good.

The phrase 'it's very it's not good' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'it was not very good'. Also, 'it's quite' is incomplete; 'quite good' completes the thought.