Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to start your answer directly and clearly without unnecessary words. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. For example, say 'Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends in my free time because I can share my thoughts and feelings with them. We stay connected through platforms like Instagram, WhatsApp, and Snapchat.'

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends in my free time because I can share my thoughts and feelings with them. We stay connected through platforms like Instagram, WhatsApp, and Snapchat.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to organize your answer with linking words. Be more specific about topics. For example, say 'I usually chat about many things with my friends, such as our emotions, thoughts, and feelings. Additionally, we discuss good food, sports, and movies.'

Exemplo: I usually chat about many things with my friends, such as our emotions, thoughts, and feelings. Additionally, we discuss good food, sports, and movies.

Sugestão: Make your answer clearer and more structured. Use linking words to compare preferences. For example, say 'I prefer chatting with a group of people for fun moments, but I also like chatting with one friend when I want to share secrets or personal emotions.'

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of people for fun moments, but I also like chatting with one friend when I want to share secrets or personal emotions.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and clarity. Avoid filler words and be concise. For example, say 'I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me understand the other person's feelings and expressions better.'

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me understand the other person's feelings and expressions better.

Sugestão: Make your answer more coherent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to explain your opinion. For example, say 'Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends about many things. However, in the end, we share our thoughts and feelings properly, which helps strengthen our friendship.'

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends about many things. However, in the end, we share our thoughts and feelings properly, which helps strengthen our friendship.

× Is I really like chatting with my friends actually in my free times?

✓ I really like chatting with my friends actually in my free time.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Is I' instead of 'I'. Also, 'free times' should be 'free time' as 'time' in this context is uncountable. The correct pronoun and singular form improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, actually all the times I chat with my friends, I share my thoughts and feelings, emotions with my friends.

✓ No, actually all the time I chat with my friends, I share my thoughts, feelings, and emotions with them.

The phrase 'all the times' should be 'all the time' to indicate frequency. Also, 'with my friends' is repeated unnecessarily; replacing the second with 'with them' avoids redundancy.

× We are connected to each other in many platforms like Instagram, WhatsApp, Snapchat.

✓ We are connected to each other on many platforms like Instagram, WhatsApp, and Snapchat.

The correct preposition for platforms is 'on' not 'in'. Also, adding 'and' before the last item in the list improves sentence flow.

× Usually I chat about lot of things with my, uh, friends.

✓ Usually I chat about a lot of things with my friends.

The phrase 'lot of things' requires an article 'a' before 'lot'. Also, the comma after 'my' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.

× Uh, one of uh, we share our emotions, thoughts, feelings, uh.

✓ We share our emotions, thoughts, and feelings.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Removing filler words and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And we share about a good food, uh, sports, movies.

✓ And we share about good food, sports, and movies.

'A good food' is incorrect because 'food' is uncountable; removing 'a' is correct. Also, adding 'and' before the last item in the list improves sentence structure.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people and the same way I prefer to chat with only one friend because uh, some things like secrets or some emotions we can share with only one friend and the fun and the fun moment and, uh.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people, and at the same time, I prefer to chat with only one friend because some things like secrets or emotions can be shared with only one friend, and fun moments are better that way.

The original sentence is run-on and unclear. Adding conjunctions, commas, and restructuring improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because that time we can, uh, knows, understand the uh feelings and expressions of the opposite 1 So I prefer communicate with face to face is a good option.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because at that time we can know and understand the feelings and expressions of the other person. So I think communicating face to face is a good option.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'knows' should be 'know'; 'the opposite 1' is unclear and corrected to 'the other person'; 'prefer communicate with face to face' is corrected to 'prefer to communicate face to face'. Also, adding 'at' before 'that time' is necessary.

× As I argue with my friends, a lot of things we argue and the last we can share our thoughts and feelings and the correct way.

✓ When I argue with my friends, we argue about many things, but in the end, we can share our thoughts and feelings in the correct way.

The original sentence has tense and structure issues. 'As I argue' is better as 'When I argue'; 'a lot of things we argue' is rephrased to 'we argue about many things'; 'the last' is corrected to 'in the end'; 'and the correct way' is corrected to 'in the correct way'.

× So I think that arguments between friends are really good.

✓ So I think that arguments between friends are really good.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.