Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains some unnatural expressions and minor grammar mistakes, such as "OK write myself down" which is unclear. Try to use more natural phrases and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I love chatting with my friends because it helps me express my feelings when I'm going through difficult times. Moreover, I often learn new things from them, which I find very helpful.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit long and repetitive, and some phrases are unnatural, such as "literally everything from like your daily life" and "without interrupting by any other things." Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words, and avoid filler words like "like" and "literally."

Exemplo: We usually talk about a wide range of topics, from daily life to philosophy and even outer space. These conversations are always inspiring and interesting, and we can chat for hours without getting bored.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but some sentences are slightly informal and could be more concise. Avoid filler phrases like "to be honest" and improve sentence structure for better flow. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am quite introverted. In a group, I tend to be quiet and not express myself much, so having a close friend is enough for me.

Sugestão: Your answer conveys the main idea but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "you can in that way you can see your friend how his facial expressions are." Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer more natural and coherent.

Exemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to see my friend's facial expressions and body language. This makes the conversation more direct and meaningful, unlike social media, which lacks these advantages.

Sugestão: Your answer has some unclear phrases like "argue fears with each other" and some redundancy. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes because we have different opinions. However, our arguments are always calm and respectful, so they don't affect our friendship.

× I can OK write myself down whenever I'm like having a difficult time

✓ I can write myself down whenever I'm having a difficult time

The phrase 'OK write' is incorrect; 'OK' is unnecessary here. Also, 'I'm like having' should be 'I'm having' because 'like' is used informally and is redundant in this context. The verb 'having' is correctly in the present participle form to indicate ongoing action.

× and secondly, I can also know new things from my friends and that's helpful

✓ and secondly, I can also learn new things from my friends and that's helpful

The verb 'know' is incorrectly used here; the correct verb is 'learn' when referring to acquiring new information. The preposition 'from' is correct, but the verb choice affects the meaning.

× Whatever we talk with each

✓ Whatever we talk about with each other

The verb 'talk' requires the preposition 'about' when referring to topics of conversation. Also, 'each' should be 'each other' to correctly express reciprocal action.

× Whatever we chat with each other is always inspiring and interesting and we can always chat for a long time without interrupting by any other things

✓ Whatever we chat about with each other is always inspiring and interesting, and we can always chat for a long time without being interrupted by anything else

The verb 'chat' requires the preposition 'about' to indicate the topic. The phrase 'without interrupting by any other things' is incorrect; it should be 'without being interrupted by anything else' to correctly express passive interruption. Also, adding a comma before 'and' improves sentence clarity.

× I would tend to like hide myself and try not to speak out

✓ I tend to hide myself and try not to speak out

The phrase 'would tend to like' is incorrect; 'tend to' is sufficient to express habitual action. The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is acceptable here, but 'hide myself' is a bit informal; however, it is understandable. The phrase 'speak out' is correct.

× I prefer communicate face to face because you can in that way you can see your friend how his facial expressions are and the body languages

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because in that way you can see your friend's facial expressions and body language

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb: 'prefer to communicate'. The phrase 'you can in that way you can see' is redundant; 'because in that way you can see' is correct. 'Your friend how his facial expressions are' is incorrect; it should be 'your friend's facial expressions'. 'Body languages' should be singular 'body language' as it is an uncountable noun.

× Well, whereas social media don't have that advantage

✓ Well, whereas social media doesn't have that advantage

'Social media' is treated as a singular collective noun here, so the verb should be 'doesn't' instead of 'don't' to agree with the subject.

× It's normal for people to have different aspects and opinions for different things and but I wouldn't say that we would argue fears with each other

✓ It's normal for people to have different views and opinions about different things, but I wouldn't say that we argue fiercely with each other

The word 'aspects' is incorrect; 'views' or 'perspectives' is more appropriate. The preposition 'for' should be 'about' when referring to opinions on topics. The phrase 'argue fears' is incorrect; likely intended 'argue fiercely'. Also, 'and but' is redundant; only 'but' is needed.