Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung tốt, nhưng cần tránh lặp từ và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời mạch lạc và hiệu quả hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because they are very friendly and supportive. Talking with them always makes me laugh and feel relaxed. Moreover, these conversations help us strengthen our friendship and stay close.

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh nói lắp và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về chủ đề bạn thường nói chuyện.

Exemplo: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, such as our hobbies and family. Sometimes, we also discuss work-related topics, which helps us solve problems and support each other.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý để làm rõ sở thích của mình về việc trò chuyện với nhóm hay một người bạn.

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. Sometimes I prefer chatting with one friend when I want a deep conversation, but other times I enjoy talking with a group to share fun moments.

Sugestão: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng câu văn hơi dài và có một số lỗi nhỏ. Hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn hơn và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication when I am near my friends because it feels more personal. However, when I am at home, I usually chat with them through social media or online platforms.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác và thiếu liên kết. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và trình bày ý rõ ràng hơn.

Exemplo: Now that I am an adult, I try to avoid arguments with my friends because conflicts can harm our relationship. In the past, I used to argue with them sometimes, but I have learned to be more understanding.

× Having conversations with them is very full of laughter and relaxing.

✓ Having conversations with them is full of laughter and relaxing.

The phrase 'very full of laughter' is incorrect because 'full' is an adjective that does not typically combine with 'very' in this context. The correct expression is 'full of laughter'. The word 'very' is unnecessary and makes the sentence awkward.

× Moreover, we can enhance our friendship and maintain a close.

✓ Moreover, we can enhance our friendship and maintain a close relationship.

The phrase 'maintain a close' is incomplete and incorrect because 'close' is an adjective that needs a noun to modify. The correct phrase is 'maintain a close relationship' or 'maintain closeness'.

× Friends every day after work and even during our working time, having conversation with them is uh, kind of frequent activities.

✓ I chat with friends every day after work and even during working hours; having conversations with them is a kind of frequent activity.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb at the beginning, making it incomplete. Also, 'having conversation' should be plural 'conversations' and 'activities' should be singular 'activity' to agree with 'a kind of'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And now we need to share something about other life.

✓ And now we need to share something about other aspects of life.

The phrase 'about other life' is vague and incorrect. Adding 'aspects of' clarifies the meaning and makes the prepositional phrase correct.

× Sometimes we have to exchange some information related to work. This is very helpful and.

✓ Sometimes we have to exchange some information related to work, which is very helpful.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'and' without completing the thought. The correction combines the two sentences properly to complete the idea.

× It varies depending on circumstances.

✓ It varies depending on the circumstances.

The phrase 'depending on circumstances' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'circumstances' to be grammatically correct.

× It at the time I only want to savor the moment individually.

✓ At times, I only want to savor the moment individually.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'It at the time' is incorrect; the corrected sentence uses 'At times' to express occasional preference.

× Actually I don't want to chat with friends at the same or at the situation.

✓ Actually, I don't want to chat with friends at the same time or in that situation.

The phrase 'at the same or at the situation' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'time' after 'same' and changing 'at the situation' to 'in that situation' corrects the sentence.

× I want to share something and enjoy the social group.

✓ I want to share something and enjoy being with the social group.

The phrase 'enjoy the social group' is awkward. Adding 'being with' clarifies the meaning and improves the sentence structure.

× I think this is a situational preference because at the time when I stay close with them, having a face to face conversation is very convenient and helpful.

✓ I think this is a situational preference because when I am close to them, having a face-to-face conversation is very convenient and helpful.

The phrase 'at the time when I stay close with them' is awkward and incorrect. 'Stay close with' should be 'am close to'. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective.

× But when I stay at home actually I often talk with them through social media or online laptop.

✓ But when I stay at home, I often talk with them through social media or online via my laptop.

The phrase 'online laptop' is incorrect. It should be 'online via my laptop' or 'using my laptop online'. Also, a comma is needed after 'at home' for clarity.

× Currently be in an adult.

✓ Currently, I am an adult.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'I am' corrects the sentence structure.

× I try to avoid any conflicts with friends because that is unhealthy and unfriendly at that time.

✓ I try to avoid any conflicts with friends because they are unhealthy and unfriendly.

The phrase 'that is unhealthy and unfriendly at that time' is awkward. Changing 'that' to 'they' to refer to conflicts and removing 'at that time' improves clarity and correctness.

× I don't want to shows my negative emotion to them.

✓ I don't want to show my negative emotions to them.

The verb 'shows' is incorrect after 'don't want to'; it should be the base form 'show'. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the context.

× However in the past I used to or argue with them.

✓ However, in the past, I used to argue with them.

The phrase 'used to or argue' is incorrect. Removing 'or' corrects the sentence. Also, commas are added for clarity.