Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and correct grammar, for example, use 'reply instantly' instead of 'get the replaying instant seconds'. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence flow by using linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it is an easier way to communicate than calling. We can send messages and get instant replies if we have mobile data. Moreover, it is a reliable and convenient way to stay connected even when we are miles apart.

Sugestão: Your answer covers the topic well but can be improved by using better linking words and more precise vocabulary. Avoid repeating words like 'also' and 'and all'. Try to make your sentences more coherent and natural.

Exemplo: I usually chat about my daily life and events at my workplace. My friends share their routines with me as well. Additionally, we discuss common topics such as recent trends on social media.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but contains grammatical mistakes and some awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend at a time because it is more reliable and I can get exact answers to my questions. In group chats, messages are often missed or ignored by some members. Therefore, I think chatting individually is more beneficial.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting some awkward phrases and improving sentence structure. For example, use 'express their true emotions' instead of 'talking the correct emotions'. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face with my closest friends because it feels more personal. We can discuss various topics and observe their real-life expressions, which helps us understand their true emotions, whether they are happy or not.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but has repetition and unclear phrasing. Avoid repeating words like 'where the where where'. Also, try to be more specific and use linking words to explain your point clearly.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends when we have different opinions on topics such as politics or gender equality. Since these subjects can have various viewpoints, disagreements are more likely to happen.

× We can just send messages and get the replaying instant seconds if we have the mobile data.

✓ We can just send messages and get the replay instantly if we have mobile data.

The word 'replaying' is incorrectly used here; the correct form is the adverb 'instantly' to describe how quickly the reply is received. 'Replaying' is a present participle verb form and does not fit the sentence context.

× It's more reliable and convenient way of knowing people each other even though we are staying miles apart.

✓ It's a more reliable and convenient way of getting to know each other even though we are miles apart.

The phrase 'way of knowing people each other' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'way of getting to know each other'. Also, 'staying miles apart' should be 'are miles apart' to indicate distance.

× They also share their daily routine to me and also we'll discuss about certain common topics like what is recently popular in social media and all.

✓ They also share their daily routine with me and we also discuss certain common topics like what is recently popular on social media and so on.

The verb 'share' is followed by 'with' not 'to'. Also, 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. 'Popular in social media' should be 'popular on social media'. 'And all' is informal; 'and so on' is more appropriate.

× In a group chat it is more common that if we send a message either it is not seen by all of the group members and we doesn't even get any reply for that.

✓ In a group chat, it is more common that if we send a message, it is either not seen by all of the group members or we don't even get any reply to that.

The verb 'doesn't' is incorrect with the plural subject 'we'; it should be 'don't'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding commas and correcting conjunctions for clarity.

× I prefer to communicate face to face with my closest friends because that's more appealing.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face with my closest friends because that's more appealing.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective or adverb.

× I think we can share on different topics and we can actually see their real life expressions and their way of talking the correct emotions whether they're happy or not by discussing a certain topic.

✓ I think we can share different topics and actually see their real-life expressions and their way of conveying the correct emotions, whether they're happy or not, by discussing a certain topic.

The phrase 'share on different topics' is incorrect; 'share different topics' is correct. 'Talking the correct emotions' is incorrect; it should be 'conveying the correct emotions'. Also, 'real life' should be hyphenated as 'real-life'.

× Yes, I argue with friends on certain topics where the where where we have different opinions.

✓ Yes, I argue with friends on certain topics where we have different opinions.

The repetition 'where the where where' is a typographical error and should be removed for correct sentence structure.