Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi kalimatnya agak panjang dan ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas, serta gunakan kata penghubung yang tepat agar jawaban terdengar lebih alami dan efektif.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends in the evening because they have finished work by then. We often talk about our day and plan when to meet during the week.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda sudah mengandung detail, tetapi penggunaan frasa seperti "and so on and so forth" kurang tepat dan membuat jawaban terdengar kurang alami. Gunakan kata penghubung yang lebih tepat dan hindari pengulangan yang tidak perlu.

Exemplo: We usually talk about our personal progress. For instance, I share my IELTS preparation, and my friend talks about his work and upcoming promotion. This helps us stay connected.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk memulai dengan kalimat topik yang jelas, gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide, dan perbaiki tata bahasa agar lebih natural.

Exemplo: It depends on the group. If they are my close friends, I prefer chatting in a group because we know each other well. However, I feel uncomfortable talking to new people, so I avoid group chats with strangers.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa serta penggunaan kata yang kurang tepat seperti "make myself more lead back". Cobalah untuk menyusun kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan jelas dengan alasan yang spesifik.

Exemplo: Currently, I prefer face-to-face communication because I work online all day. Meeting friends in person helps me relax and socialize better.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda mengandung pengulangan dan kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas, serta hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu agar jawaban terdengar lebih alami.

Exemplo: I try to avoid arguments with my friends because they are important to me. I want to maintain good relationships with them for a long time.

× I like chatting with friends in the evening because I know the time they already have gone back from work and we sometimes talk about what happened in the day.

✓ I like chatting with friends in the evening because I know the time they have already gone back from work and we sometimes talk about what happened during the day.

The phrase 'already have gone back' is incorrect in word order; the correct form is 'have already gone back' because the adverb 'already' should be placed between the auxiliary verb 'have' and the past participle 'gone'. Also, 'in the day' should be 'during the day' to correctly express the time period.

× Also, we decide what time that we want to meet every week.

✓ Also, we decide what time we want to meet every week.

The word 'that' is unnecessary in this sentence and its removal improves clarity and grammatical correctness. The clause 'what time we want to meet' is sufficient without 'that'.

× I always share my IELTS progress with my friend and he always shares his work progress, when will he be promoted in the future and so on and so forth and that way keep our relationship good.

✓ I always share my IELTS progress with my friend and he always shares his work progress, when he will be promoted in the future and so on and so forth, and that way keeps our relationship good.

The phrase 'when will he be promoted' is incorrect in indirect speech; it should be 'when he will be promoted'. Also, 'that way keep' should be 'that way keeps' to agree with the singular subject 'that way'.

× It depends on what group is.

✓ It depends on what the group is.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'group' to specify which group is being referred to.

× I prefer to chat them in the group because we already know each other.

✓ I prefer to chat with them in the group because we already know each other.

The verb 'chat' requires the preposition 'with' when referring to the people one is chatting with.

× I don't feel comfortable to talk in front of new people.

✓ I don't feel comfortable talking in front of new people.

The adjective 'comfortable' is followed by a gerund ('talking') rather than an infinitive ('to talk'). This is the correct grammatical structure.

× For now, I prefer to communicate face to face because all of my work that I do are online, so in order to make myself more lead back, I need to go out and hang out to meet my friend face to face.

✓ For now, I prefer to communicate face to face because all of the work that I do is online, so in order to make myself more laid back, I need to go out and hang out to meet my friends face to face.

The phrase 'all of my work that I do are' is incorrect because 'work' is uncountable and singular, so the verb should be 'is'. Also, 'lead back' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'laid back'. Additionally, 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match the context of socializing.

× They they, they are meaningful for me and I want to get along with them for a long time ahead.

✓ They are meaningful to me and I want to get along with them for a long time ahead.

The repeated word 'They' is a typographical error and should be removed. Also, the correct preposition is 'meaningful to me' rather than 'meaningful for me'.