Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question and providing clear supporting details. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. Whenever we meet, I like to catch up on what’s new in their lives. I find these conversations important because they help me understand my own thoughts and feelings better.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains some confusing phrases. Try to organize your ideas more clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid filler words. Be specific about the topics you discuss with your friends.

Exemplo: Usually, I chat with my friends about our daily activities, such as upcoming assignments and sports events. For example, we talk about basketball and cricket games, and sometimes we discuss which players are performing well.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by clearer sentence structure and more natural phrasing. Try to use linking words to contrast your preferences and provide specific reasons for each.

Exemplo: I prefer both chatting with a group and with one friend. Group conversations are fun and help me clarify my goals, while one-on-one talks are more emotional and personal.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be made more concise and natural. Avoid repeating phrases and use linking words to make your response smoother. Also, try to use simpler expressions for clarity.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows for deeper connection and helps me clear up any doubts more effectively than social media.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and naturally. Use linking words to explain the cause and effect, and avoid absolute statements like 'I am right and they are wrong.'

Exemplo: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions about our life plans. However, we usually reach a mutual understanding in the end.

× Yeah, I do that chatting with my friends.

✓ Yeah, I do that by chatting with my friends.

The verb 'do' requires a preposition 'by' before the gerund 'chatting' to indicate the manner of doing something. Without 'by', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× Whenever I meet my friends, I always want to talk with, uh, new intensity, what they are doing in their life.

✓ Whenever I meet my friends, I always want to talk with, uh, new intensity about what they are doing in their life.

The verb 'talk' is usually followed by the preposition 'about' when referring to the topic of conversation. Omitting 'about' makes the sentence unclear and grammatically incorrect.

× But when I talk to my friend, I always clear my doubts as well as my thought process, how I'm feeling right now.

✓ But when I talk to my friends, I always clear my doubts as well as my thought process about how I'm feeling right now.

The plural form 'friends' is more appropriate here because the context suggests multiple friends. Also, adding 'about' before 'how I'm feeling' clarifies the sentence structure.

× Whenever I meet my friends, I always get about the ongoing activity in our day-to-day life.

✓ Whenever I meet my friends, I always get information about the ongoing activities in our day-to-day life.

The verb 'get' needs an object to make sense. Adding 'information' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'activities' should be plural to match 'ongoing' and the context.

× Like what are the assignments that we have in our next few days?

✓ Like what assignments we have in the next few days?

The phrase 'in our next few days' is awkward; 'in the next few days' is the correct expression. Also, 'assignments' is plural, which is correct here.

× If there is a a sports that is going on like basement game as well as BA basketball games and importantly cricket.

✓ If there are sports events going on like basement games as well as BA basketball games and importantly cricket.

The noun 'sports' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'basement game' should be plural 'basement games' to match the plural context.

× So we always uh catch few moments that which player is cool.

✓ So we always, uh, catch a few moments to see which player is cool.

The phrase 'catch few moments that which player is cool' is unclear. Adding 'a' before 'few moments' and changing 'that' to 'to see' clarifies the meaning and corrects the prepositional use.

× I always prefer both of them because when I talk to the group of people, I clear my doubt what I want to do in my life and I always feel that it is essential for me to have fun in Group talk.

✓ I always prefer both of them because when I talk to a group of people, I clear my doubts about what I want to do in my life and I always feel that it is essential for me to have fun in group talks.

'Group of people' should be preceded by 'a' to indicate one group. 'Doubt' should be plural 'doubts' as it refers to multiple uncertainties. 'Group talk' should be plural 'group talks' to indicate general activity.

× But when I talk to a person individually, I always feel that it is emotional talk.

✓ But when I talk to a person individually, I always feel that it is an emotional talk.

The noun 'talk' here is countable and requires an article 'an' before it to be grammatically correct.

× Communication is indispensable in everybody's life, so I always prefer to talk to in face to face because when I talk to face to face with someone, I always feel that it connects me with a deeper knowledge and I always feel that it helps me to clear my doubt rather than talking on the social media.

✓ Communication is indispensable in everybody's life, so I always prefer to talk face to face because when I talk face to face with someone, I always feel that it connects me with deeper knowledge and helps me clear my doubts rather than talking on social media.

The phrase 'talk to in face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'talk face to face'. Also, 'a deeper knowledge' should be 'deeper knowledge' without 'a'. 'Clear my doubt' should be plural 'doubts'. 'Talking on the social media' should be 'talking on social media' without 'the'.

× Yes, whenever I am dissatisfied with my friend talks what they want to do in their life or they are failed to clarify my thought process, I always argue with them that I am right and they are wrong.

✓ Yes, whenever I am dissatisfied with my friends' talks about what they want to do in their life or they fail to clarify my thought process, I always argue with them that I am right and they are wrong.

'Friend talks' should be possessive plural 'friends' talks'. 'Are failed' is incorrect; the correct form is 'fail' to indicate habitual action. The sentence is in present tense, so 'fail' is appropriate.

× So that how we argue with each other.

✓ So that's how we argue with each other.

The phrase 'So that how' is incorrect. It should be 'So that's how' as a contraction of 'that is' to introduce an explanation.