Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to reduce filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more effectively. For example, you can say that chatting helps you catch up and brightens your day with jokes in a concise way.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me catch up on their lives and often brightens my day with their jokes.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer linking words and more precise vocabulary. Instead of 'like for example', use 'such as' or 'for instance'. Also, clarify the benefits of the seminars more specifically.

Exemplo: We usually chat about how we are doing and support each other. For instance, we share information about UMM seminars, which help us develop skills and improve our resumes.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating words like 'with a with a' and filler words such as 'umm'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, explain your introversion first, then state your preference clearly.

Exemplo: As an introvert, I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows me to build a deeper connection rather than talking to a large group.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat incomplete and ends abruptly. Try to complete your thoughts fully and avoid vague phrases like 'the being there'. Use linking words to organize your ideas and finish your sentences clearly.

Exemplo: I am comfortable communicating both face-to-face and via social media because what matters most is the message and supporting each other, which helps foster deeper connections.

Sugestão: Try to improve sentence structure by using conjunctions properly and avoid run-on sentences. Also, use more precise vocabulary like 'disagree' instead of 'argue' if appropriate, and clarify your points with linking words.

Exemplo: I don't often argue with friends because we usually share similar opinions. However, if I disagree with something, I express my thoughts respectfully since we are both responsible individuals.

× And it changes my day because they say jokes and it makes me happy.

✓ And it changes my day because they tell jokes and it makes me happy.

The verb 'say' is incorrect here; the correct verb to use with 'jokes' is 'tell'. This is a collocation issue where 'tell jokes' is the proper phrase in English.

× We chat about how each other is doing and then we try to support one another.

✓ We chat about how each other are doing and then we try to support one another.

The phrase 'each other' refers to multiple people, so the verb should be plural 'are' instead of singular 'is' to agree with the plural subject.

× We share resources like for example UMM seminars, which is helping us progress at the time and giving us opportunities to enrich our resumes.

✓ We share resources like, for example, UMM seminars, which are helping us progress at the time and giving us opportunities to enrich our resumes.

The subject 'UMM seminars' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× I'd prefer to chat with only one friend because I wanted to foster more connection with a with a friend.

✓ I'd prefer to chat with only one friend because I want to foster more connection with a friend.

The sentence expresses a present preference, so the verb should be in the present tense 'want' instead of past tense 'wanted' to match the context.

× I'm an introvert and as an introvert, umm I value deeper connection and friendship more than crowd or a lot of people.

✓ I'm an introvert and as an introvert, umm I value deeper connection and friendship more than crowds or a lot of people.

The word 'crowd' should be plural 'crowds' to correctly compare with 'a lot of people' which is plural.

× I'm as comfortable as the other and what's really important is the message, the connection and the being there for each other, supporting each other.

✓ I'm as comfortable as the other person and what's really important is the message, the connection, and being there for each other, supporting each other.

The phrase 'the other' is incomplete and should be 'the other person' for clarity. Also, 'the being there' is incorrect; it should be 'being there' without 'the'.

× This in turn fosters deeper.

✓ This in turn fosters deeper connections.

The sentence is incomplete; 'deeper' is an adjective that needs a noun to complete the meaning. Adding 'connections' completes the sentence properly.

× She's a responsible person and I'm a responsible person too. We don't have much differences in opinion.

✓ She's a responsible person and I'm a responsible person too. We don't have many differences in opinion.

The quantifier 'much' is used with uncountable nouns, but 'differences' is countable plural, so 'many' should be used instead.