Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'and' multiple times, use connectors like 'which' or 'so that'.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because I learn a lot from them. When I face challenges, they offer good advice, which helps me stay motivated and positive.

Sugestão: Be more specific and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to clarify your points and ensure coherence. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'variety of topics' should be 'a variety of topics'.

Exemplo: Usually, we talk about a variety of topics such as relationships, work, and our daily routines. For example, we often share recipes because we enjoy cooking and want to improve our lifestyle.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Make sure to finish your sentences and clarify your ideas. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because I believe quality is more important than quantity. Spending quality time allows us to deepen our relationship and have meaningful conversations.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but could be improved by correcting grammar and adding linking words. For example, say 'communicate with each other' and use 'however' to contrast ideas.

Exemplo: I find face-to-face communication more engaging and meaningful because we can see facial expressions and body language, which helps us understand each other better. However, sometimes it's not possible; for example, my friend lives in California, so we usually communicate online.

Sugestão: Good answer with clear ideas. To improve, correct minor grammar errors and use linking words for coherence. For example, say 'the most important thing is' and 'we try to turn our debates into constructive discussions.'

Exemplo: Yes, sometimes we argue with each other, but the most important thing is that we respect each other's points of view and try to turn our debates into constructive and meaningful discussions.

× I learn a lot from them and when I face challenges in my life, they offer good advice and and support me and they help me to stay motivated and positive.

✓ I learn a lot from them, and when I face challenges in my life, they offer good advice and support me, and they help me to stay motivated and positive.

The sentence has repeated conjunction 'and' which is incorrect. Also, commas are needed to separate clauses for clarity. Correct use of conjunctions and punctuation improves sentence flow and readability.

× Usually we are talking about variety of topics like relationship, workplace and even our daily routine.

✓ Usually we talk about a variety of topics like relationships, the workplace, and even our daily routine.

The phrase 'talking about variety of topics' is missing the article 'a' before 'variety'. Also, 'relationship' should be plural 'relationships' to match the context. 'Workplace' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the context. Present simple tense 'talk' fits better here than present continuous 'are talking' for habitual actions.

× For example, most of the time we share our recipes because we enjoy cooking and really we like to improve our lifestyle and most of the time our conversation.

✓ For example, most of the time we share our recipes because we enjoy cooking, and we really like to improve our lifestyle and our conversations.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation. Adding commas and conjunctions clarifies the meaning. 'Conversation' should be plural 'conversations' to match the context.

× When it comes to relationship, I prefer quality over quantity because I believe that we need to deepen our conversation our our relationship with spending quality time together.

✓ When it comes to relationships, I prefer quality over quantity because I believe that we need to deepen our conversations and our relationships by spending quality time together.

'Relationship' should be plural 'relationships' to generalize. The phrase 'deepen our conversation our our relationship' is incorrect and repetitive; it should be 'deepen our conversations and our relationships'. 'With spending' should be 'by spending' to correctly express the means.

× And to achieve this I think we need to have smaller.

✓ And to achieve this, I think we need to have smaller groups.

The sentence is incomplete; 'smaller' is an adjective that needs a noun to modify. Adding 'groups' completes the thought. Also, a comma after 'this' improves readability.

× For example, now my friend lives in California and most of the time we communicate each other.

✓ For example, now my friend lives in California, and most of the time we communicate with each other.

The verb 'communicate' requires the preposition 'with' when referring to the person communicated with. Missing 'with' is a common preposition error.

× Yes, sometimes we argue with each other, but the most important things is we try to respect each other's point of view and we turn our debate to constructive and meaningful discussion.

✓ Yes, sometimes we argue with each other, but the most important thing is we try to respect each other's point of view and we turn our debates into constructive and meaningful discussions.

'Things' should be singular 'thing' to agree with singular verb 'is'. 'Debate' and 'discussion' should be plural to match the plural subject 'we' and to indicate multiple instances. Also, 'turn our debate to' should be 'turn our debates into' for correct collocation.