Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Perbaiki kelancaran dan hindari pengulangan kata seperti 'uh'. Jawaban juga bisa lebih terstruktur dengan kalimat topik yang jelas dan detail yang lebih spesifik. Misalnya, jelaskan mengapa chatting lebih nyaman dan bagaimana stiker membuat percakapan lebih menyenangkan.

Exemplo: Yes, I like chatting with friends because it is more convenient than phone calls. Moreover, messenger apps offer cute stickers that make our conversations more fun and expressive.

Sugestão: Jawaban perlu lebih terorganisir dan menggunakan kata penghubung untuk membuatnya lebih koheren. Hindari pengulangan kata dan gunakan kosakata yang lebih tepat untuk menjelaskan topik pembicaraan secara spesifik.

Exemplo: I usually chat about various topics such as work, my hobbies, and our plans to meet up. These conversations help us stay connected and coordinate our activities.

Sugestão: Jawaban terputus dan kurang lengkap. Perlu menyelesaikan kalimat dan menggunakan struktur yang jelas. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan kondisi dan preferensi dengan lebih terperinci.

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. If the topic is private, I prefer chatting one-on-one. However, for group plans, I like chatting with multiple friends together.

Sugestão: Jawaban tidak lengkap dan kurang jelas. Perlu menyelesaikan kalimat dan memperbaiki tata bahasa. Gunakan kalimat yang lengkap dan jelas untuk menyatakan preferensi dengan alasan yang spesifik.

Exemplo: It depends on who I am talking to. With close friends, I prefer face-to-face conversations because they feel more personal. But with acquaintances, I usually communicate via social media.

Sugestão: Jawaban tidak selesai dan membingungkan. Perlu menjawab langsung dengan kalimat lengkap dan memberikan contoh spesifik tentang argumen dengan teman. Hindari pengulangan dan gunakan kosakata yang tepat.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions or misunderstandings. However, we usually resolve these disagreements quickly.

× I also enjoy, uh, the messenger apps that often provide the cute sets of stickers I think it makes.

✓ I also enjoy, uh, the messenger apps that often provide cute sets of stickers, which I think are nice.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'it makes' which does not agree with the plural noun 'sets of stickers'. The correction uses 'which I think are nice' to properly refer to the plural noun and clarify the meaning.

× I do actually, uh, almost chat about everything with my friend.

✓ I do actually, uh, almost chat about everything with my friends.

The original sentence uses 'my friend' which is singular, but the context suggests chatting with multiple friends. Changing to 'my friends' corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× It all really depends on the situation.

✓ It really all depends on the situation.

While 'depends on the situation' is correct, the placement of 'all' is better before 'depends' for natural English flow. This is a minor stylistic improvement rather than a strict grammatical error.

× I mean, if the, uh, topic is more privacy than I would really like to uh, chat with an individual like 1 by 1.

✓ I mean, if the, uh, topic is more private, then I would really like to, uh, chat with an individual one-on-one.

'More privacy' is incorrect because 'privacy' is a noun; the adjective 'private' should be used. Also, 'like 1 by 1' is informal and unclear; 'one-on-one' is the correct expression.

× But if it were like a plan to meet to do something together, then.

✓ But if it were like a plan to meet and do something together, then I would prefer chatting in a group.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main clause after 'then'. The correction completes the sentence to make it grammatically correct and clear.

× Like again it really depends on with who I chat so if it my close friends then is I think it will be nice to have a face to face conversation but if I do not really close with the person then I prefer.

✓ Like again, it really depends on who I chat with. If it is my close friends, then I think it will be nice to have a face-to-face conversation, but if I am not really close with the person, then I prefer chatting online.

The original sentence has incorrect word order ('depends on with who'), missing auxiliary verbs ('if it my close friends'), and incomplete clauses. The correction fixes pronoun usage, verb forms, and sentence completeness.

× As most of friends do, yes, I do agree with my friends.

✓ As most friends do, yes, I do agree with my friends.

The phrase 'most of friends' is incorrect because 'friends' is a plural noun without a determiner. The correct form is 'most friends'.

× Sometimes it's about, uh, my opinion about something that is different with them or maybe about something that I did and.

✓ Sometimes it's about, uh, my opinion about something that is different from theirs or maybe about something that I did.

The phrase 'different with them' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'different from'. Also, the sentence was incomplete; the correction completes it properly.