Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够自然，语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议使用完整句子，避免重复和口语填充词，表达更清晰。

Exemplo: No, I don't really enjoy chatting with friends. I prefer to spend time alone in a quiet room, doing activities like reading or checking my emails.

Sugestão: 回答内容消极且表达不清晰，语法错误明显。建议用更礼貌和积极的方式表达观点，并提供具体原因。

Exemplo: I usually chat about common interests like movies or hobbies. However, sometimes I find conversations less engaging if we don't share similar knowledge.

Sugestão: 回答表达不够流畅，语法和用词有误。建议使用更准确的表达，句子结构完整，表达清晰。

Exemplo: I prefer chatting one-on-one with a friend because it feels more genuine and comfortable, allowing me to be myself.

Sugestão: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达含糊。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连接词使句子流畅。

Exemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it makes me feel more comfortable and genuine. Sometimes, I become more talkative in person.

Sugestão: 回答较为自然，内容合理，但有口语填充词，句子结构可更紧凑。建议减少口语化表达，增强句子连贯性。

Exemplo: Yes, I often argue with friends, but I believe it's normal because everyone has different experiences, knowledge, and backgrounds.

× I don't like, I just want everybody leaves me alone.

✓ I don't like it, I just want everybody to leave me alone.

动词want后面应接不定式to leave，而不是第三人称单数leaves。这里需要用动词不定式表达愿望。

× I could stay in a quiet room and do my own things just like, uh, reading, texting in my texting e-mail or just screen on screen.

✓ I could stay in a quiet room and do my own things like reading, texting in my email, or just looking at the screen.

动词后接动名词形式表示正在进行的动作，texting in my texting e-mail表达不自然，改为texting in my email更合适；'screen on screen'表达不清，改为looking at the screen更准确。

× I don't like chat with friends, why not 'cause after a few chatting I feel like that their knowledge is much lower than me.

✓ I don't like chatting with friends, because after a few chats I feel like their knowledge is much lower than mine.

动词like后应接动名词chatting；'after a few chatting'应为'after a few chats'，因为chat作名词时复数形式；'lower than me'应为'lower than mine'，比较时需用名词所有格。

× I think it just waste of time meanwhile.

✓ I think it is just a waste of time meanwhile.

缺少系动词is，waste作为名词前应加冠词a。

× One-on-one face is chatting would make me feel genuine and comfortable in that situation I could just be my.

✓ One-on-one face-to-face chatting would make me feel genuine and comfortable; in that situation, I could just be myself.

face-to-face是固定搭配；'be my'应为反身代词myself；句子结构需调整以表达完整意思。

× It's commute, it's communicated face to face.

✓ It's communication; it's communicated face to face.

commute是动词，意思是通勤，名词应为communication；句子表达不清，需用名词communication。

× Well, communicate face to face will make me feel comfortable, genuine and not going and so on.

✓ Well, communicating face to face will make me feel comfortable, genuine, and so on.

动词communicate应改为动名词communicating作主语；'not going'表达不清，去掉更合适。

× Maybe sometimes I could be a talkative person when I'm in that situation.

✓ Maybe sometimes I can be a talkative person when I'm in that situation.

could表示过去或假设，表达现在可能性用can更合适。

× Often, but I think argument is a normal situation when you're talking with your friends.

✓ Often, but I think arguing is a normal situation when you're talking with your friends.

argument是名词，表示争论；这里应使用动名词arguing表示争吵的动作。

× Why not? Because everyone has different experience, has different, uh, knowledge, different backgrounds.

✓ Why not? Because everyone has different experiences, different knowledge, and different backgrounds.

experience应为复数experiences，表示不同的经历；列举时应保持并列结构一致。