Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally good but a bit long and slightly redundant. Try to keep your answer within 4-5 sentences and avoid repeating ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me share my thoughts and feel connected. However, I prefer face-to-face conversations as they feel more meaningful. Recently, I have also started enjoying some alone time to reflect and relax."

Exemplo: I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me share my thoughts and feel connected. However, I prefer face-to-face conversations as they feel more meaningful. Recently, I have also started enjoying some alone time to reflect and relax.

Sugestão: Your answer has many fillers and some unclear expressions. Try to avoid fillers like 'uh' and 'umm' and use clearer vocabulary. Also, start with a direct topic sentence and then add specific details using linking words. For example, "My friends and I usually chat about various topics. For instance, we discuss personal and family problems, recent news, social media trends, and our studies."

Exemplo: My friends and I usually chat about various topics. For instance, we discuss personal and family problems, recent news, social media trends, and our studies.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and repetition. Try to use correct grammar and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, "I prefer chatting with a group because it includes different people with various opinions. This way, we can share and learn from each other's views on the topic."

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group because it includes different people with various opinions. This way, we can share and learn from each other's views on the topic.

Sugestão: Your answer repeats previous points and ends abruptly. Try to give a complete answer with clear linking words and avoid repetition. For example, "I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more meaningful and genuine. In contrast, social media conversations can be less personal and sometimes delayed."

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more meaningful and genuine. In contrast, social media conversations can be less personal and sometimes delayed.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and is a bit unclear. Try to use simpler and clearer sentences with correct grammar. For example, "Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions. These differences can lead to disagreements when we cannot agree on a topic."

Exemplo: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions. These differences can lead to disagreements when we cannot agree on a topic.

× And me and my friends, uh, we all are a yapper.

✓ My friends and I, uh, we all are yappers.

The phrase 'And me and my friends' is incorrect because 'me' should be 'I' when used as the subject of a sentence. Also, 'a yapper' is incorrect because 'yapper' is a countable noun and should be pluralized to 'yappers' when referring to multiple people. The correct subject order is 'My friends and I'.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because a group of people have a different types of people including different opinions.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because a group of people has different types of people including different opinions.

The subject 'a group of people' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'a different types' is incorrect because 'types' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. The correct phrase is 'different types'.

× We all have our different opinions and we would love to chat and know about different opinions on the ongoing topic.

✓ We all have our different opinions and we would love to chat and learn about different opinions on the ongoing topic.

While not strictly a grammar error, 'know about' is less appropriate than 'learn about' when referring to gaining knowledge through discussion. This improves clarity and correctness.

× face to face communications are meaningful and genuine and we do feel a connection with the opposite person.

✓ face-to-face communication is meaningful and genuine and we do feel a connection with the other person.

'Communications' should be singular 'communication' when referring to the act of communicating. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. 'Opposite person' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'other person'.

× Yes, sometimes I do argue with my friends because we all have a different opinion on the topic so which could not match and which could not make everyone satisfied with the answer or or chat.

✓ Yes, sometimes I do argue with my friends because we all have different opinions on the topic, so they may not match and may not satisfy everyone with the answer or chat.

'A different opinion' should be plural 'different opinions' because multiple people have multiple opinions. 'Which' is incorrectly used; it should be 'they' referring to opinions. Also, 'make everyone satisfied' is better expressed as 'satisfy everyone'.