Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and clear, but try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and keep your sentences concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Although I consider myself introverted, I enjoy chatting with friends because it makes me feel at ease and happy. Moreover, sharing daily experiences with enthusiastic listeners makes the conversations more enjoyable.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and lacks linking words. Try to organize your ideas with connectors and avoid repeating similar phrases.

Exemplo: I usually chat about my daily activities, such as what I ate for breakfast or dinner. Additionally, I share stories about places I visited during the weekend, like the mall or the park.

Sugestão: Try to avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and check grammar, for example, 'much better' instead of 'much more better'.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend at a time because it makes me feel more comfortable and ensures that I am heard clearly.

Sugestão: Avoid grammar mistakes like 'much more better' and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, try to be more concise and natural in your expression.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see people's expressions, which I find essential for meaningful conversations.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating phrases like 'I avoid I avoid' and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, try to vary your vocabulary to express your ideas more effectively.

Exemplo: I rarely argue with friends because I try to avoid conflicts and tension. As an introverted person, I prefer maintaining harmony in my relationships.

× Sharing conversations and daily life umm occurrences makes me feel happier.

✓ Sharing conversations and daily life occurrences makes me feel happier.

The filler 'umm' is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence flow. Removing it improves clarity and correctness.

× I usually chat about the usual what I do during my day, what I ate for breakfast or even what I ate for dinner.

✓ I usually chat about the usual things I do during my day, what I ate for breakfast, or even what I ate for dinner.

The phrase 'the usual what I do' is incorrect. Adding 'things' after 'usual' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× I also tell them about some of the places that I went to during the weekend such as the mall, to the park or even just buying stuff from shops.

✓ I also tell them about some of the places that I went to during the weekend such as the mall, the park, or even just buying stuff from shops.

The preposition 'to' before 'the park' is unnecessary because 'such as' already introduces examples. Removing 'to' makes the sentence correct.

× I just enjoy chatting with one person at a time, it feels much more better to me.

✓ I just enjoy chatting with one person at a time; it feels much better to me.

The phrase 'much more better' is incorrect because 'better' is already a comparative form. Using 'much better' is correct.

× Chatting with friends face to face is much more better to me.

✓ Chatting with friends face to face is much better to me.

Similar to the previous error, 'much more better' is incorrect. 'Much better' is the correct comparative form.