Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и избыточные слова. Постарайтесь говорить более естественно и кратко, избегая повторений и исправляя грамматические ошибки.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends every day, especially about activities we do together, like football, since we play regularly.

Sugestão: В вашем ответе есть грамматические ошибки и повторения. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и старайтесь быть более конкретным в описании.

Exemplo: We usually talk about our hobbies and activities. For instance, I enjoy reading and often share with my friends the books I have read recently.

Sugestão: Ваш ответ понятен, но содержит ошибки в грамматике и словоупотреблении. Используйте правильные предлоги и формы слов, а также связывайте предложения для плавности.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because the atmosphere is more friendly and lively, which makes me happy since I can talk about anything with them.

Sugestão: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность и точность выражений. Используйте более подходящие слова и связывайте идеи.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it makes me happy and allows me to see people's emotions directly, which is really nice.

Sugestão: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Старайтесь использовать правильные формы глаголов и более точные слова для описания эмоций.

Exemplo: No, I don't like arguing with friends because it creates a negative atmosphere and makes me feel bad afterwards.

× You sure are chatting with my friend every day and especially talking about some activities, what we do together, uh, especially it's football because we're so professional football players and uh, we playing every day.

✓ You sure are chatting with my friend every day and especially talking about some activities, what we do together, uh, especially it's football because we're so professional football players and uh, we play every day.

The verb 'playing' should be in the base form 'play' after the auxiliary verb 'we' to maintain correct subject-verb agreement and tense. 'We playing' is incorrect; it should be 'we play'.

× We tend to discuss about different things, especially it's about our activities, our hobbies.

✓ We tend to discuss different things, especially it's about our activities, our hobbies.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Saying 'discuss about' is incorrect; the correct form is 'discuss different things'.

× For example, I really like reading and everyday are sharing with my friends about what kind of book I read, read and and then of course.

✓ For example, I really like reading and every day I share with my friends about what kind of books I read, and then of course.

'Everyday' is an adjective meaning common or normal; the correct phrase here is 'every day' meaning each day. Also, 'are sharing' is incorrect for the subject 'I'; it should be 'I share'. Additionally, 'book' should be plural 'books' to match the context.

× Of course I prefer to chat with a group of friend because for me it atmosphere more like friendly and lively.

✓ Of course I prefer to chat with a group of friends because for me the atmosphere is more friendly and lively.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' because it refers to multiple people. Also, 'it atmosphere' is missing the verb 'is' and the article 'the' before 'atmosphere'.

× It makes me really happy because I feel like I have a lot of friends whose I can speak about everything.

✓ It makes me really happy because I feel like I have a lot of friends with whom I can speak about everything.

The relative pronoun 'whose' is incorrectly used here. 'Whose' indicates possession, but the correct phrase is 'friends with whom' to indicate the people the speaker can talk to.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it makes me really happy and of course I can see right now emotions of people and it's really cool.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it makes me really happy and of course I can see people's emotions right now and it's really cool.

The phrase 'see right now emotions of people' is awkward and incorrect. The correct form is 'see people's emotions right now' to show possession and correct word order.

× No, I don't really like argue with friends because it makes atmosphere so negatively and after some discussing about negative perspective it's something you feel bad.

✓ No, I don't really like to argue with friends because it makes the atmosphere so negative and after some discussions about negative perspectives, it's something that makes you feel bad.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the infinitive 'to argue'. 'Makes atmosphere so negatively' is incorrect; it should be 'makes the atmosphere so negative'. 'Discussing about' is incorrect; 'discussions about' is correct. Also, 'something you feel bad' is incomplete; it should be 'something that makes you feel bad'.