Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như "you know" và "uh" để câu trả lời trở nên mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có thể được rút gọn để tránh lặp lại ý.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and share interesting stories from our daily lives.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và tránh dùng các từ không cần thiết như "you know". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về chủ đề bạn thường nói chuyện.

Exemplo: As students, we usually talk about school life, including dramas happening at school, and we also help each other with homework and study together.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và sử dụng từ chính xác, ví dụ từ "tapped" không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này, nên dùng "get together" hoặc "meet". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và có thêm liên từ để tăng tính logic.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because we can share different opinions and decide on the best option together.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "I choose communicate" nên là "I choose to communicate". Câu cuối cũng không rõ nghĩa, bạn nên diễn đạt lại để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to understand the other person's emotions more clearly.

Sugestão: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, ví dụ "me and my friend" nên là "my friend and I", và "when give a choices" nên là "when giving choices". Hãy tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như "you know" và làm câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

Exemplo: Sometimes my friends and I have different opinions, so we argue when we discuss choices or ideas.

× Definitely while chatting is one of my favorite activities that I usually do when I have free time and you know that chatting with friends, uh, can help me recharge my batteries and we can tell each other stories in daily life.

✓ Definitely, chatting is one of my favorite activities that I usually do when I have free time, and you know that chatting with friends can help me recharge my batteries and we can tell each other stories about daily life.

The phrase 'while chatting' is incorrectly used here. 'While' suggests simultaneous actions, but the intended meaning is to state that 'chatting' itself is a favorite activity. Removing 'while' and using 'chatting' as a gerund subject corrects the sentence structure.

× As being students, we often share interesting stories about our daily life of such as some drama in our schools and you know, we sometimes share the homework and practice together.

✓ As students, we often share interesting stories about our daily life, such as some drama in our schools, and you know, we sometimes share homework and practice together.

The phrase 'As being students' is incorrect; 'As students' is the correct form. Also, 'daily life of such as' is incorrect; it should be 'daily life, such as'. The article 'the' before 'homework' is unnecessary because 'homework' is uncountable.

× Well, maybe a group of friends, because when we tapped together we can share our opinions and consider which one is the most suitable.

✓ Well, maybe a group of friends, because when we get together we can share our opinions and consider which one is the most suitable.

The word 'tapped' is incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'get together' to indicate meeting or gathering. 'Tapped' is the past tense of 'tap' and does not fit the context.

× Well, from my perspective, I choose communicate face to face. You know, when I talk with someone in the real life, I can fundamental to know their exact emotion to talk.

✓ Well, from my perspective, I choose to communicate face to face. You know, when I talk with someone in real life, I can fundamentally know their exact emotions when talking.

The verb 'choose' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb: 'choose to communicate'. 'In the real life' is incorrect; 'in real life' is the correct phrase. 'Fundamental' is an adjective; the adverb 'fundamentally' is needed here. Also, 'emotion to talk' is unclear; 'emotions when talking' is clearer.

× Maybe sometimes you know that me and my friend sometimes have opposite viewpoint, so we usually argue or have conflicts when give a choices or opinions.

✓ Maybe sometimes, you know, my friend and I sometimes have opposite viewpoints, so we usually argue or have conflicts when giving choices or opinions.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrect as a subject; it should be 'I'. 'Opposite viewpoint' should be plural 'opposite viewpoints' to match the plural subject. 'When give a choices' is incorrect; it should be 'when giving choices'. Also, 'choices' is plural, so 'a' should be removed.