Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'I'd love to chat' instead of 'I'd love to do chat' and 'relieves my pain' instead of 'relieve my pains'.

Exemplo: Yes, I love chatting with my friends because it helps me relieve stress after a busy day. Moreover, talking with them entertains me and refreshes my mind.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit long and repetitive. Try to organize your ideas clearly with linking words and avoid vague phrases like 'many kinds of useful information'. Be more specific and concise.

Exemplo: I usually chat with my friends about current events in our country, especially politics. Sometimes, when we gather in small groups, we also discuss entertainment and media to relax.

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more fluent and avoid grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about what you learn from your friends. Avoid unnecessary repetition.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because we share many experiences from growing up in the same city. This helps me learn different perspectives and gather useful information.

Sugestão: Focus on clear and natural phrasing. Correct grammar mistakes such as 'face-to-face communication gives me energy' and avoid awkward expressions like 'reduce my instability'. Use linking words to compare both methods clearly.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it gives me more energy and helps me understand others better. However, social media is also useful for staying in touch when meeting in person is not possible.

Sugestão: Try to improve grammar and sentence structure. Avoid repetition and clarify your ideas. Use linking words to explain reasons for arguments more clearly.

Exemplo: Yes, I often argue with my friends because we support different political parties. These discussions can be intense, but they show how passionate we are about our beliefs.

× I'd love to do chat with my friends because when I get panicked from my work and I get a lot of stress, it helps me to get stress free.

✓ I'd love to chat with my friends because when I get panicked from my work and I get a lot of stress, it helps me to get stress free.

The phrase 'do chat' is incorrect because after 'do' we use the base form of the verb, but here 'chat' is already the base form. The correct expression is 'I'd love to chat' without 'do'.

× And talking with friends or chatting with friends is a very useful thing for me because sometimes it entertains me and relieve my pains also and I can I feel refresh.

✓ And talking with friends or chatting with friends is a very useful thing for me because sometimes it entertains me and relieves my pains also and I can feel refreshed.

The verb 'relieve' should be in third person singular form 'relieves' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'I can I feel refresh' is incorrect; it should be 'I can feel refreshed' where 'refreshed' is the past participle used as an adjective. The extra 'I' is removed for clarity.

× sometimes when we two or three friends are gathering together, we talk a lot about our politics, our country and also some media to entertain ourselves.

✓ sometimes when two or three of us friends are gathering together, we talk a lot about our politics, our country and also some media to entertain ourselves.

The phrase 'we two or three friends' is awkward. It is better to say 'two or three of us friends' to correctly use the pronoun and clarify the group.

× that helped me for gather many kinds of information and I learned a lot from them about to to hear their experiences.

✓ that helped me gather many kinds of information and I learned a lot from them by hearing their experiences.

The phrase 'helped me for gather' is incorrect; 'helped me gather' is correct without 'for'. Also, 'about to to hear' is incorrect; it should be 'by hearing' to express the method of learning.

× I've always preferred to communicate with face to face with a friend or a people or a person because face to face communication give me another kind of energy and it helps me to reduce my instability and also helps me to learn a lot of things.

✓ I've always preferred to communicate face to face with a friend or a person because face to face communication gives me another kind of energy and it helps me to reduce my instability and also helps me to learn a lot of things.

The phrase 'communicate with face to face with' is incorrect; it should be 'communicate face to face with'. Also, 'a people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural; 'a person' is correct. Additionally, 'communication give' should be 'communication gives' to agree with singular subject.

× Most of the time I argued with my friends because sometimes we talked about in our about our politics and my friend is the opponent party and I am the current running party in the in those topics always we are arguing because we love the opponent teams.

✓ Most of the time I argue with my friends because sometimes we talk about our politics and my friend is in the opposing party and I am in the current ruling party. In those topics, we are always arguing because we support opposing teams.

The use of past tense 'argued' and 'talked' is inconsistent with the present habitual action implied by 'most of the time'. Present tense 'argue' and 'talk' are appropriate. Also, 'opponent party' should be 'opposing party', and 'current running party' should be 'current ruling party'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.