Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Та илүү байгалийн, үр дүнтэй хариулт өгөхийн тулд үгсийн алдааг засаж, илүү товч бөгөөд тодорхой хэлэх хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "I prefer chatting to calling because calling makes me anxious and I struggle to find the right words, which can make situations worse." гэж хэлж болно.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting to calling because calling makes me anxious and I struggle to find the right words, which can make situations worse.

Sugestão: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, логик холбоос үгс ашиглан сайжруулж, үгсийн алдааг засах хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "We usually chat about our daily lives; for example, we share how our day went, what food we ate, and updates about our relationships."

Exemplo: We usually chat about our daily lives; for example, we share how our day went, what food we ate, and updates about our relationships.

Sugestão: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, товч бөгөөд алдаагүй хэлбэрээр илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй. Холбоос үгсийг ашиглан логик дараалал үүсгэх нь чухал. Жишээ нь, "It depends on the situation. When I need solutions, I prefer group chats because more opinions help. But when I want to express feelings, I talk to one close friend."

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. When I need solutions, I prefer group chats because more opinions help. But when I want to express feelings, I talk to one close friend.

Sugestão: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, алдаагүй, логик холбоос үгс ашиглан сайжруулах хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "I prefer face-to-face communication because I can express my feelings better. On social media, I sometimes choose wrong words, which can change the tone."

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can express my feelings better. On social media, I sometimes choose wrong words, which can change the tone.

Sugestão: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, алдаагүй, логик холбоос үгс ашиглан сайжруулах хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "We argue maybe once a month because we are different people with different experiences. Sometimes we disagree on small things like food choices."

Exemplo: We argue maybe once a month because we are different people with different experiences. Sometimes we disagree on small things like food choices.

× I prefer to chatting rather than calling.

✓ I prefer chatting rather than calling.

After the verb 'prefer', the gerund form (verb + -ing) should be used without 'to'. The phrase 'prefer to chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer chatting'. English (Mongolia): 'prefer' үгийн дараа 'to' биш, харин үйл үгийн -ing хэлбэрийг ашиглах ёстой.

× sometimes calling is more gives me more anxious

✓ sometimes calling makes me more anxious

The phrase 'is more gives me more anxious' is grammatically incorrect. The verb 'gives' should be replaced with 'makes' to express causing a feeling, and 'more' should be placed before 'anxious' as an adjective. Also, 'is more' is unnecessary here. English (Mongolia): 'gives' биш 'makes' ашиглах ёстой, мөн 'more anxious' гэж зөв байрлалд бичих хэрэгтэй.

× that's make makes the situations more worse.

✓ that makes the situation worse.

The subject 'that' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes'. 'Situations' should be singular 'situation' to match the context. Also, 'more worse' is incorrect; 'worse' is already comparative, so 'more' is unnecessary. English (Mongolia): Нэг утгатай 'that' үгтэй тул 'makes' үйл үг хэрэгтэй, 'more worse' биш зөвхөн 'worse' гэж бичнэ.

× our chat usually about the, our daily life updates

✓ Our chat is usually about our daily life updates.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' to be grammatically correct. Also, the comma after 'the' is unnecessary. English (Mongolia): Өгүүлбэрт 'is' үйл үг дутагдаж байна, мөн 'the,' гэсэн таслал хэрэггүй.

× we, we tells, we tell each other how our day went

✓ we tell each other how our day went

The correct verb form for 'we' is 'tell', not 'tells'. English (Mongolia): 'we' сэдвийн дараа үйл үг 'tell' байх ёстой, 'tells' биш.

× more people's opinion gives the right right answer.

✓ more people's opinions give the right answer.

'People's' is plural possessive, so 'opinions' should be plural. Also, 'gives' should be 'give' to agree with plural subject 'opinions'. The repeated 'right' is redundant. English (Mongolia): Олон хүний санал бол олон тооны 'opinions' байх ёстой, мөн үйл үг олон тоонд тохирсон 'give' байх хэрэгтэй.

× that's really depend.

✓ that really depends.

'That' is singular, so the verb should be 'depends' to agree in number. English (Mongolia): 'that' сэдэвтэй тул үйл үг 'depends' байх ёстой.

× I prefer to face to face

✓ I prefer face-to-face

The phrase 'prefer to face to face' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'prefer face-to-face' without 'to' before 'face-to-face'. English (Mongolia): 'prefer' дараа 'to' биш, харин 'face-to-face' гэж бичнэ.

× that's the tone of my word can change.

✓ the tone of my words can change.

'Word' should be plural 'words' to refer to multiple words. Also, 'that's' is unnecessary here. English (Mongolia): 'word' биш 'words' гэж олон тоонд бичих хэрэгтэй.

× That happens maybe once in a month. Be, uh, absolutely there.

✓ That happens maybe once a month. Absolutely, there are times like that.

'Be' is incorrect here and should be removed. 'Once in a month' is better expressed as 'once a month'. Also, 'there' needs a verb to form a correct sentence. English (Mongolia): 'Be' үг хэрэггүй, 'once in a month' биш 'once a month' гэж бичнэ, мөн 'there' үгтэй өгүүлбэрт үйл үг хэрэгтэй.

× which is what food we chose or something like that.

✓ such as what food we choose or something like that.

'Chose' is past tense; here present tense 'choose' is appropriate. Also, 'which is what' is awkward; 'such as' is better to introduce examples. English (Mongolia): 'chose' биш 'choose' гэж одоогийн цагт бичих хэрэгтэй, мөн 'which is what' оронд 'such as' ашиглах нь илүү тохиромжтой.