Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了喜欢与朋友聊天的原因，但句子结构有些复杂且不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复表达，并注意语法，如“advices”应为“advice”。

Exemplo: Yes, I like chatting with my close friends because I can share both happy and sad moments with them. They also give me good advice when I have relationship problems or questions about the future.

Sugestão: 回答内容丰富，但表达不够连贯，且有语法错误，如“There's so many things”应为“There are many things”。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意名词单复数形式。

Exemplo: I usually chat about many topics with my friends. For example, we talk about celebrities, TV dramas, events happening around us, fashion tips, and advice about the future.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误，如“only one friends”应为“only one friend”，且句子重复。建议使用完整句子并避免重复，同时使用连接词提高连贯性。

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel awkward when I send messages in a group chat and no one replies. However, when I chat with one friend, they always respond to me.

Sugestão: 回答表达了观点，但有语法和表达不自然的问题，如“take mistakes with my umm tongues”。建议使用更准确的表达，并简化句子结构。

Exemplo: Honestly, I prefer communicating via social media because it gives me time to organize my words and avoid making mistakes. Also, I can send pictures or memes to show my mood.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误，如“avoid to argue”应为“avoid arguing”，且表达重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法正确性。

Exemplo: No, I don't argue with my friends. Since I have only one or two close friends, I try to avoid arguments because I don't want to lose them.

× I like to share my happy and sad moments with my close friend and also if I have some relationship issues or some other future advices to want to ask my friends, they always respond to me.

✓ I like to share my happy and sad moments with my close friends and also if I have some relationship issues or some other future advice I want to ask my friends, they always respond to me.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because the student refers to multiple friends. Also, 'advices' is incorrect because 'advice' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. The phrase 'to want to ask' is awkward and should be 'I want to ask'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× There's so many things I can chat with my friends, for instance some celebrities, drama, something happens around me or just some fashion advice or future advice I can all discuss with my friends.

✓ There are so many things I can chat about with my friends, for instance some celebrities, drama, things that happen around me or just some fashion advice or future advice I can all discuss with my friends.

The phrase 'There's' is incorrect because 'things' is plural, so it should be 'There are'. Also, 'chat with' should be 'chat about' to correctly express the topic of conversation. 'Something happens' should be 'things that happen' for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× Prefer to chat with only one friends because I feel so awkward when I send something to the group chat and no one responds me.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I feel so awkward when I send something to the group chat and no one responds to me.

'Friends' should be singular 'friend' because it refers to only one person. The sentence also lacks the subject 'I' at the beginning. Additionally, 'responds me' is incorrect; it should be 'responds to me' to use the correct verb-preposition combination.

× But it's different with chat with only one friends.

✓ But it's different when I chat with only one friend.

'Friends' should be singular 'friend' because it refers to one person. The phrase 'with chat with' is awkward and should be rephrased to 'when I chat with' for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× No matter what, they will always respond to me.

✓ No matter what, they will always respond to me.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Honestly I prefer and communicate via social media because it gives me sometimes to organize the words so that I don't take mistakes with my umm tongues or something and also I can send some pictures or some memes to represent my mood.

✓ Honestly, I prefer to communicate via social media because it gives me time to organize my words so that I don't make mistakes with my tongue or something, and also I can send some pictures or memes to represent my mood.

The phrase 'prefer and communicate' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to communicate'. 'Sometimes' is incorrectly used; 'time' is appropriate here. 'Take mistakes' is incorrect; it should be 'make mistakes'. 'My umm tongues' is awkward; 'my tongue' is better. Adding commas improves sentence clarity.

× No, no, absolutely not. I only have one or two close friends so I avoid to argue with them because I don't want to lose them because fight.

✓ No, no, absolutely not. I only have one or two close friends, so I avoid arguing with them because I don't want to lose them because of fights.

The phrase 'avoid to argue' is incorrect; 'avoid' should be followed by the gerund form 'arguing'. 'Because fight' is incomplete and should be 'because of fights' to correctly express the reason. Adding a comma before 'so' improves sentence structure.