Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is slightly repetitive with phrases like "helps me to interact with my friends" and "helps to stay connected." Try to avoid redundancy by combining ideas and using varied vocabulary. Also, keep your answer concise within 4-5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to stay connected and share my thoughts and feelings openly. This interaction strengthens our relationships and provides emotional support.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains filler words like "uh" and some repetition. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be specific about the types of daily experiences or advice you seek to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: I usually talk about my daily experiences, such as work or hobbies, which helps maintain our bond. Additionally, I often seek advice from my friends when facing challenges, as their support is valuable to me.

Sugestão: Your answer is well-structured and expresses your opinion clearly. However, try to avoid long sentences by breaking them into shorter ones for clarity. Also, use linking words like "because" and "therefore" to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a single friend because it allows me to build a strong bond. One person can understand me better, and having a single opinion simplifies my problems. Therefore, I value quality over quantity in friendships.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but includes many filler words like "uh" and some awkward phrasing. Try to speak more fluently and use complete sentences. Also, explain your reasons more clearly and avoid starting sentences with "Because."

Exemplo: I prefer communicating via social media because it helps me stay connected with my friends daily. Since I have a hectic schedule, meeting face-to-face is often difficult for me.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains filler words and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. Also, explain why you argue and how it helps your relationships.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when discussing different opinions, especially on subjective matters. I enjoy sharing my advice because it helps us understand each other better.

× I prefer a single friend to chat with because I maintain a strong bond with one person rather than chatting with a group of large people because one person can understand me better and having one opinion simplifies my problems further.

✓ I prefer a single friend to chat with because I maintain a strong bond with one person rather than chatting with a large group of people because one person can understand me better and having one opinion simplifies my problems further.

The phrase 'a group of large people' is incorrect because 'large' is an adjective describing size, not quantity. The correct quantifier for a big number of people is 'large group of people'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Moreover, I don't believe in a quantity of persons, I believe in the quality he or she represents.

✓ Moreover, I don't believe in the quantity of people; I believe in the quality they represent.

The phrase 'believe in a quantity of persons' is awkward and incorrect. 'Quantity' is usually used with uncountable nouns, and 'persons' is less common than 'people'. Also, 'he or she represents' is better replaced with 'they represent' for generalization. The preposition 'in' is correct here, but the noun phrase needed adjustment for natural English usage.

× Well, I prefer to communicate via social media to my friends because it gives me a sense of, uh, connection and strong bond with them to chat on daily basis.

✓ Well, I prefer to communicate with my friends via social media because it gives me a sense of connection and a strong bond with them to chat on a daily basis.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used after 'communicate'. The correct preposition is 'with' when referring to the person you communicate with. Also, 'on daily basis' needs the article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× Because meeting a person is not, uh, not that uh, applicable to me because I have very hectic schedule.

✓ Because meeting a person is not, uh, that applicable to me because I have a very hectic schedule.

The phrase 'very hectic schedule' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'very hectic schedule' because 'schedule' is a countable noun. Also, the double negative 'not, uh, not that' is redundant and should be simplified to 'not that'.

× Yes, I sometimes love to argue with my friends over specific situations where advice is needed because uh such as situation where a person is debating or having a a subjective matter.

✓ Yes, I sometimes love to argue with my friends over specific situations where advice is needed, such as situations where a person is debating or having a subjective matter.

The phrase 'such as situation' is incorrect because 'situation' should be plural to match 'such as' which introduces examples. Also, the repeated 'a a' is a typographical error. The sentence structure is improved by removing 'because uh' and adding a comma before 'such as'.

× I love to give my advice to person.

✓ I love to give my advice to a person.

The noun 'person' is singular and countable, so it requires an article. The indefinite article 'a' is appropriate here to indicate any person. Omitting the article makes the sentence grammatically incorrect.