Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and conveys your feelings well, but try to avoid informal contractions like 'convo' and be more concise. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and escape from daily stress. Moreover, having genuine conversations with close friends makes me feel supported.

Sugestão: Try to avoid redundancy such as 'most randomest' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details.

Exemplo: I usually chat about various topics, such as football, going to the gym, our education, and future plans. For instance, we often discuss upcoming exams or career goals.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and detailed, but avoid repetition like 'if I am if I am' and use linking words to improve flow. Also, try to combine sentences for conciseness.

Exemplo: I don't mind chatting with either a group or just one friend; it depends on my mood. For example, when I'm feeling down, I prefer talking to a close friend, but when I'm happy, I enjoy group conversations.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated words. Be more concise and use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is more reliable and allows me to read facial expressions. However, social media is convenient when meeting in person isn't possible.

Sugestão: Your answer is honest and detailed, but avoid informal phrases like 'like we don't take it personally' and filler words such as 'you know'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when I feel frustrated or tired. However, these disagreements are temporary because we understand that everyone can have a bad day, so we quickly make up.

× I usually chat about the most randomest things with my friends, but it is more like about football or a gym, or you can say what we are doing in our lives with our educations or what are the future plans.

✓ I usually chat about the most random things with my friends, but it is more like about football or the gym, or you can say what we are doing in our lives with our education or what our future plans are.

The word 'randomest' is incorrect because 'random' is a non-gradable adjective and does not take comparative or superlative forms. The correct form is 'most random'. Also, 'a gym' should be 'the gym' when referring to a specific place. 'Educations' is incorrect as 'education' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralised. The sentence 'what are the future plans' should be reordered to 'what our future plans are' to maintain correct sentence structure.

× Depends on my mood.

✓ It depends on my mood.

The sentence lacks a subject. In English, sentences require a subject; here, 'It' is the appropriate subject to refer to the situation. Omitting the subject results in a sentence fragment.

× Basically if I am if I am just frustrated or I am sad, I would like to chat with just only one friend who is closest to me.

✓ Basically, if I am just frustrated or sad, I would like to chat with only one friend who is closest to me.

The phrase 'if I am if I am' is a repetition error and should be corrected to a single 'if I am'. The phrase 'just only one friend' is redundant; 'only one friend' suffices. Also, 'who is closest to me' is correct as it refers to a singular friend.

× But if the mood is good and the vibe is there, then I would love to have a chat with a group of people.

✓ But if the mood is good and the vibe is there, then I would love to have a chat with a group of people.

No correction needed; the preposition 'with' is correctly used here.

× I guess both are fine for me, but I, I, I would go for face to face communication because it is more, you know, uh, reliable and it's more easy to, you can just say it and you can just say what are the like, uh, facial expressions, but via social media sometime it's just hard to communicate.

✓ I guess both are fine for me, but I would go for face-to-face communication because it is more, you know, reliable and it's easier to, you can just say it and you can just say the facial expressions, but via social media sometimes it's just hard to communicate.

The phrase 'more easy' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'easier'. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The phrase 'what are the like, uh, facial expressions' is awkward and should be simplified to 'the facial expressions' for clarity.

× Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes when I'm frustrated or I am mentally exhausted, but it's just for a while.

✓ Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes when I'm frustrated or mentally exhausted, but it's just for a while.

No correction needed; the preposition 'with' is correctly used here.