Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, keep your answer clear and concise, for example, say 'Yes, I like chatting with my friends and I do it often.'

Exemplo: Yes, I like chatting with my friends and I do it often to stay connected.

Sugestão: Use correct grammar and sentence structure. Be specific and clear about the topics you discuss. For example, say 'We usually talk about our daily activities and share updates on social media.'

Exemplo: We usually talk about what we did during the day and share interesting things on social media.

Sugestão: Try to avoid starting sentences with 'Yes' unnecessarily and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, 'I prefer chatting with a group because it helps me learn new things and relieve stress.'

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to learn new things and share interesting stories, which helps me relax.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Directly answer the question and explain your preference with reasons. For example, 'I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps build stronger relationships.'

Exemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it helps build stronger and more personal relationships.

Sugestão: Use clearer sentence structure and explain your answer logically. For example, 'Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions, but we usually resolve it quickly.'

Exemplo: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions, but we always try to understand each other and make up soon.

× Yes, I like chatting with friends and usually most of the time I was I am, uh, chatting with my friend.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends and usually most of the time I am chatting with my friends.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'was' with present tense 'am'. Since the question is about a habitual action, present tense 'am chatting' is appropriate. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context.

× I usually chatting with my friends and yes what I doing today and what she do in a day and what was our other friend doing with each other.

✓ I usually chat with my friends and talk about what I am doing today, what she does in a day, and what our other friend is doing.

The verb 'chatting' should be in base form 'chat' after 'usually'. Also, 'what I doing' lacks auxiliary verb 'am'. 'What she do' should be 'what she does' for third person singular. 'What was our other friend doing' should be present tense 'what our other friend is doing' to match the habitual context.

× That's why we are sharing about social media.

✓ That's why we are sharing on social media.

The correct preposition with 'sharing' in this context is 'on' not 'about'. 'Sharing on social media' means posting or communicating via social media platforms.

× Yes, I prefer to chat with a group of people rather than my one friend.

✓ Yes, I prefer to chat with a group of people rather than with one friend.

The phrase 'my one friend' is awkward; 'one friend' is sufficient. Also, adding 'with' before 'one friend' improves clarity and parallelism.

× Because if you chat with a group of people, you can gather some knowledge and also you can release your stress.

✓ Because if you chat with a group of people, you can gain some knowledge and also relieve your stress.

The verb 'gather' is better replaced with 'gain' when referring to knowledge. 'Release your stress' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'relieve your stress'.

× It's became our relation more and more, uh, more and more strong.

✓ It has become our relationship stronger and stronger.

'It's became' is incorrect; the present perfect 'has become' is correct. 'Relation' should be 'relationship'. 'More and more strong' should be 'stronger and stronger' for correct comparative form.

× Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends and because when we both are not connected with the same things or same topic then I'm OK with my friends.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends, but when we are not connected on the same things or topics, I am okay with my friends.

The sentence structure is awkward. 'Because' should be replaced with 'but' to connect contrasting ideas. 'Connected with' should be 'connected on'. 'Same things or same topic' should be plural 'topics' for consistency.