Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally relevant but lacks clarity and natural phrasing. Avoid vague expressions like "check this thing" and try to be more specific and concise. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me share my experiences and learn new things from them. For instance, after work, I often discuss interesting events from my day to get their opinions.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words. Be specific about the topics and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Exemplo: I usually chat with friends about topics we all enjoy, such as movies. For example, recently we discussed a film we watched together, sharing our opinions and thoughts about it.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases like "more anchor" and "check with group my friend." Try to express your preference clearly and provide specific reasons with examples. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of close friends because it helps me gain different perspectives and opens my mind. For instance, we often meet at a coffee shop to relax and share our experiences together.

Sugestão: Your answer conveys the main idea but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct sentence structures and vocabulary to express your preference clearly. Also, avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer communicating face-to-face because it allows me to see my friends' facial expressions and emotions. For example, we often meet at a coffee shop where I can better understand their feelings.

Sugestão: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to explain your ideas clearly and use specific examples. Avoid repetition and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, sometimes I argue with friends because it helps me understand different viewpoints. For example, I recently had a discussion about politics in my country, which allowed me to see their opinions more clearly.

× For example, I'd like to check this thing after work to share some experience from today.

✓ For example, I'd like to check this thing after work to share some experiences from today.

The word 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' because it refers to multiple instances or types of experience shared from the day. Using the plural form is appropriate here to indicate more than one experience.

× Well, I actually chat chat with friends when we talk something that we're interested in together because we can share some experience that we like and enjoy it together.

✓ Well, I actually chat with friends when we talk about something that we're interested in together because we can share some experiences that we like and enjoy together.

The sentence contains a repeated word 'chat chat' which is a redundancy and should be corrected to a single 'chat'. Also, 'talk something' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'talk about something'. Additionally, 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' to indicate multiple shared experiences. The phrase 'enjoy it together' is better as 'enjoy together' to avoid awkwardness.

× For example, we I recently chatted with friends about the movie that we that we watch in the same time that we can share the.

✓ For example, I recently chatted with friends about the movie that we watched at the same time so that we could share our thoughts.

The sentence has several issues: 'we I' is incorrect and should be 'I'. The verb 'watch' should be in past tense 'watched' to match 'recently chatted'. 'In the same time' should be 'at the same time'. The phrase 'that we can share the' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'so that we could share our thoughts' to make sense.

× Well, I actually prefer chatting with good people because group are chatting with good people allows me to understand more, more anchor that's that's opened my mind.

✓ Well, I actually prefer chatting with good people because chatting with a group of good people allows me to understand more, which opens my mind.

The phrase 'group are chatting' is incorrect; 'group' is singular and should be 'a group'. The sentence structure is awkward and redundant; 'more anchor that's that's opened my mind' is unclear and corrected to 'which opens my mind' for clarity and correctness.

× For example, I usually check with group my friend at a coffee shop that gets relaxed and share more experience.

✓ For example, I usually meet with a group of my friends at a coffee shop where we relax and share more experiences.

The phrase 'check with group my friend' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'meet with a group of my friends'. 'That gets relaxed' is incorrect; it should be 'where we relax'. 'Experience' should be plural 'experiences' to indicate multiple shared experiences.

× Well, actually I really enjoy chatting by face to face because when other face to face allow me to see the acting or emotional from the uh, from the my friend.

✓ Well, actually I really enjoy chatting face to face because it allows me to see the actions or emotions from my friend.

The phrase 'chatting by face to face' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'chatting face to face'. 'When other face to face allow me' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'because it allows me'. 'Acting or emotional' should be 'actions or emotions'. 'From the uh, from the my friend' is redundant and corrected to 'from my friend'.

× For example, I usually chatting with friends at a coffee shop that we can I can feel some emotion or some express.

✓ For example, I usually chat with friends at a coffee shop where I can feel some emotion or expression.

The phrase 'I usually chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'I usually chat'. 'That we can I can feel' is awkward and corrected to 'where I can feel'. 'Some express' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'expression'.

× Yes, sometime I argue with friend because when we argue each other, we can I can gain some benefit from the the another side.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with friends because when we argue with each other, I can gain some benefit from the other side.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Argue with friend' should be 'argue with friends' to match plural. 'Argue each other' is incorrect; it should be 'argue with each other'. 'We can I can' is redundant; corrected to 'I can'. 'The the another side' is incorrect; corrected to 'the other side'.

× For example, I recently argued with something with a political in my country that we could that we can know exercise what they think.

✓ For example, I recently argued about politics in my country so that we could understand what they think.

The phrase 'argued with something with a political' is incorrect; corrected to 'argued about politics'. 'That we could that we can know exercise what they think' is unclear and ungrammatical; corrected to 'so that we could understand what they think' for clarity and correctness.