Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, "relieve stress" should be "relieves stress" to agree with the subject. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas like "chatting" and "talk about problems" without linking them smoothly. Try to use linking words and correct verb forms to make your answer more natural and effective.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and relieves stress. Moreover, we often discuss the problems we face in our daily lives, which makes our conversations meaningful.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and has some grammatical mistakes. For example, "discussed about" should be "discussed" without "about." Also, the last sentence is unfinished. Try to complete your ideas and use linking words like "not only... but also" correctly. Provide specific examples with clear explanations.

Exemplo: We usually chat about problems we encounter in daily life, not only about work but also about relationships. For instance, one of my friends recently shared her issues with her boyfriend, and we discussed possible solutions together.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but some sentences can be more natural. For example, "if I shared" should be "if I share" or "when I share." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Avoid repeating similar words like "feel" and "comfortable" without variation.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am quite introverted. When I share my thoughts in front of a group, I often feel awkward and embarrassed. Therefore, one-on-one conversations are more comfortable for me.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but incomplete and contains grammatical errors. For example, "important matters" should be plural without "an," and "communicate to" is incorrect; it should be "communicate face-to-face." Also, avoid repeating phrases like "I am a very introverted person" without adding new information. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: I prefer communicating via social media because, as I mentioned, I am quite introverted. If possible, I use online applications to chat. However, for important matters, I prefer face-to-face communication.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and contains grammatical errors. For example, "everyone have" should be "everyone has," and "various topic" should be "various topics." The last word "Should" is incomplete and confusing. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. Arguments sometimes happen between friends because everyone has different perspectives on various topics. Moreover, misunderstandings or disagreements can easily occur, which may lead to arguments.

× Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel relaxed and relieve stress and we often talk about the problems that we face in our life.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel relaxed and relieves stress, and we often talk about the problems that we face in our life.

The verb 'relieve' should be in the third person singular form 'relieves' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, a comma before 'and' improves sentence clarity.

× For example, one of my friends recently shared the problems she had with her boyfriend and we discussed about the solution from.

✓ For example, one of my friends recently shared the problems she had with her boyfriend and we discussed the solution.

The verb 'discuss' is not followed by the preposition 'about'. Also, the phrase 'from' is incomplete and unnecessary here.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I am a very introverted person and I will feel a little bit awkward and embarrassed if I shared in front of a group of people.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I am a very introverted person and I will feel a little bit awkward and embarrassed if I share in front of a group of people.

The verb tense should be consistent; 'shared' is past tense but the sentence refers to a future or hypothetical situation, so 'share' (present tense) is correct.

× However, if there's an important matters, I could also communicate to.

✓ However, if there are important matters, I could also communicate.

'Matters' is plural, so 'there's' (there is) should be 'there are'. Also, 'communicate to' is incorrect; 'communicate' does not require 'to' here.

× I think arguments happen sometimes between friends because everyone have different perspectives on various topic.

✓ I think arguments happen sometimes between friends because everyone has different perspectives on various topics.

'Everyone' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has'. Also, 'topic' should be plural 'topics' to match 'various'.