Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and grammatically correct. For example, use 'boosts' instead of 'boost' to agree with the singular subject 'chatting'. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it boosts my energy and makes me feel sociable.

Sugestão: Your answer covers relevant content but has some grammatical errors and hesitations. Use present simple tense consistently ('I usually talk'), and avoid repetition ('communi, that communication'). Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I usually talk about routine things in daily life, such as the food we eat, how we spend our leisure time, and events at work, because I think communication is very important.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Avoid phrases like 'it's a greatly depends'. Complete your thoughts fully and use linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand' to contrast ideas.

Exemplo: I think it greatly depends on the situation. For example, if I want to learn about a specific topic, like work experience, I prefer to talk to one person. However, if I want to discover new restaurants or places, chatting with a group is better.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be more concise and natural. Use 'easily accessible' instead of 'easily accessed' and avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer social media because it fits my busy schedule and provides a faster, more convenient way to communicate with friends and family compared to face-to-face interactions.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains hesitations and grammatical errors. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and double negatives like 'didn't do not agree'. Use clear and concise sentences with appropriate linking words.

Exemplo: To be honest, I rarely argue with my friends because I prefer discussing things. For example, if we disagree on a topic, we share different views and try to understand each other instead of arguing.

× Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends which boost my energy and give me the sense of being sociable.

✓ Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends which boosts my energy and gives me the sense of being sociable.

The verbs 'boost' and 'give' need to agree with the singular subject 'which' referring to 'chatting'. Therefore, they should be in the third person singular form 'boosts' and 'gives'.

× I've usually talked about routine things that happen in our daily life, for example, the food we eat and how we spend our leisure time and what has happened in our workplace.

✓ I usually talk about routine things that happen in our daily life, for example, the food we eat, how we spend our leisure time, and what happens in our workplace.

The use of 'I've usually talked' is incorrect because the student is describing habitual actions, which require the present simple tense 'I usually talk'. Also, 'what has happened' should be 'what happens' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I think it's a greatly depends on the situation.

✓ I think it greatly depends on the situation.

The phrase 'it's a greatly depends' is incorrect. 'Depends' is a verb and should not be preceded by 'a'. The correct structure is 'it greatly depends'.

× For example if you want to know about some specific topic, for example an experience in the work, you can discuss with one person.

✓ For example, if you want to know about some specific topic, such as an experience at work, you can discuss it with one person.

The sentence lacks commas after 'For example' and 'if you want to know'. Also, 'an experience in the work' is better expressed as 'an experience at work'. The verb 'discuss' requires an object, so 'it' is added.

× But if you want to know about new restaurants or places.

✓ But if you want to know about new restaurants or places, you can ask a group of people.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a main clause. It needs completion to form a complete sentence.

× I personally prefer social media as we are very busy with our daily routine and it gives us a faster route to communicate with our friends and families.

✓ I personally prefer social media as we are very busy with our daily routine and it gives us a faster way to communicate with our friends and family.

The phrase 'a faster route to communicate' is awkward; 'a faster way to communicate' is more natural. Also, 'families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family.

× It's more convenient and easily accessed compared with face to face interactions.

✓ It's more convenient and easily accessible compared with face-to-face interactions.

The adjective 'accessible' is correct instead of 'accessed'. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective.

× To be honest there, I rarely argue with my friends as I prefer to discuss about things.

✓ To be honest, I rarely argue with my friends as I prefer to discuss things.

The word 'there' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Also, 'discuss' is a transitive verb and should not be followed by 'about'.

× Uh, for example, if we didn't do not agree uh, about the topic, uh, I prefer to discuss different views and so we can change our minds instead of arguing.

✓ For example, if we do not agree about a topic, I prefer to discuss different views so we can change our minds instead of arguing.

The phrase 'didn't do not agree' is a double negative and incorrect. The correct form is 'do not agree'. Also, 'uh' fillers should be omitted for clarity.