Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Perbaiki penggunaan kosakata dan tata bahasa agar jawaban terdengar lebih alami dan efektif. Hindari pengulangan kata dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan terstruktur.

Exemplo: I don't usually enjoy chatting casually, but I often communicate with my colleagues to solve problems and improve our work processes.

Sugestão: Perbaiki kelancaran berbicara dengan mengurangi pengulangan dan penggunaan kata pengisi seperti 'uh'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan jelas.

Exemplo: When I chat with my friends, we usually talk about hobbies, places to hang out, and food. However, with colleagues, our conversations mostly focus on work-related topics.

Sugestão: Kurangi penggunaan kata pengisi seperti 'uh' dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan alami.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting in a group because it allows me to get suggestions from others. However, for important matters, I prefer one-on-one conversations.

Sugestão: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan variasi kosakata untuk membuat jawaban lebih menarik dan alami.

Exemplo: I usually prefer communicating through social media because it's flexible and efficient. However, for important issues like project improvements, I prefer face-to-face meetings.

Sugestão: Gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan tata bahasa yang benar. Jelaskan alasan dengan lebih spesifik dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk kelancaran.

Exemplo: I rarely argue with my friends, but I often have discussions with colleagues. These arguments help us improve our work and gain better insights.

× Actually getting is not my cup of tea, but when it comes to some work purposes I have to check many of my colleagues because by chatting we can solve the problem and also communicate to a better improvement for our works.

✓ Actually, chatting is not my cup of tea, but when it comes to some work purposes, I have to check with many of my colleagues because by chatting we can solve problems and also communicate for better improvement in our work.

The phrase 'Actually getting' is incorrect; the verb 'get' should be in the '-ing' form 'chatting' to match the context. Also, 'check many of my colleagues' should be 'check with many of my colleagues' to use the correct preposition. 'Communicate to a better improvement' is incorrect; it should be 'communicate for better improvement'. 'Works' should be singular 'work' when referring to tasks or jobs collectively.

× When it come to chatting with, to chat with my friends, actually, I'm talk about uh, some, some things like a hobby, uh, place to hang out and also food.

✓ When it comes to chatting with my friends, actually, I talk about some things like hobbies, places to hang out, and also food.

The verb 'come' should be in third person singular present tense 'comes' to agree with 'it'. 'I'm talk' is incorrect; it should be 'I talk' to use the simple present tense. 'A hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' to match the general meaning. 'Place' should be plural 'places' to be consistent.

× But when it comes to colleagues, I always chatting about our works.

✓ But when it comes to colleagues, I am always chatting about our work.

The verb 'chatting' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense 'I am always chatting'. 'Works' should be singular 'work' when referring to tasks collectively.

× Actually, I prefer to chat in a group conversation because in a group conversation we also have some suggestions, uh, from others.

✓ Actually, I prefer to chat in a group conversation because in a group conversation we also get some suggestions from others.

The phrase 'have some suggestions' is acceptable but 'get some suggestions' is more natural in this context. No strict grammar error here, but improving word choice enhances clarity.

× But when it comes to important things, I prefer to chat, uh, with an individual rather than group chat.

✓ But when it comes to important things, I prefer to chat with an individual rather than in a group chat.

The phrase 'rather than group chat' lacks the preposition 'in' before 'group chat' to indicate the setting of the chat.

× Actually I prefer to communicate with social media because it quite flexible and also efficient.

✓ Actually, I prefer to communicate via social media because it is quite flexible and also efficient.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect when referring to communication through a medium; 'via' or 'through' is appropriate. Also, 'it quite flexible' lacks the verb 'is'.

× But when it comes to important things like some project improvement or work purposes, I prefer to meet in person.

✓ But when it comes to important things like some project improvements or work purposes, I prefer to meet in person.

'Project improvement' should be plural 'project improvements' to match the plural context of 'important things'.

× With friends, not really, but when it comes to arguing colleagues, I do a lot of arguing with them because it is the way for us to improve our job and have a better insight.

✓ With friends, not really, but when it comes to arguing with colleagues, I do a lot of arguing with them because it is the way for us to improve our job and gain better insight.

The phrase 'arguing colleagues' is incorrect; it should be 'arguing with colleagues' to use the correct preposition. Also, 'have a better insight' is better expressed as 'gain better insight'.