Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is good but try to be more concise and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to make your answer flow better. For example, instead of repeating 'chatting with them', you can say 'I usually share stories about my day and discuss interesting news or events.'

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends very much. Usually, I share stories about my day and discuss interesting news or events I have come across. This helps us stay connected and understand each other better.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by structuring it better and using linking words. Also, avoid short, incomplete sentences like 'Excited.' Instead, express your feelings clearly within the sentence.

Exemplo: Mostly, I chat about things that concern us both. For instance, my friend's wedding is coming up soon, so we often discuss how to get our hair and makeup done to look our best on that special day. I am really excited about her marriage.

Sugestão: Good answer but try to add linking words and more specific reasons to support your preference. Also, avoid small grammar mistakes like 'share my daily life to her' — it should be 'share my daily life with her.'

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with only one friend because having a close friend is very important to me. I feel more comfortable sharing my daily life with her, which I wouldn't like to share with many people.

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid unnecessary phrases like 'My cousin is interesting question.' Also, use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar mistakes. For example, say 'I prefer both because face-to-face communication allows me to see reactions, while social media helps us stay connected when apart.'

Exemplo: That's an interesting question. I prefer both face-to-face and social media communication. Face-to-face allows me to see the other person's reactions and body language, while social media, like Instagram, helps us stay connected even when we are far apart.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and correction of grammar errors. Avoid unclear phrases like 'I go can bring.' Also, use linking words to explain your point logically. For example, say 'Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, but I try to share my opinion calmly and listen to theirs so we can learn from each other instead of fighting.'

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends. However, I always try to share my opinion calmly and listen to theirs. This way, we both learn from each other's experiences instead of fighting.

× Chatting with them involves telling them about how my day went and gisting them about what I saw probably in the news, or my neighbor, or from my neighbor or anyone else.

✓ Chatting with them involves telling them about how my day went and gisting them about what I probably saw in the news, or from my neighbor, or from anyone else.

The placement of 'probably' was incorrect; it should modify 'saw' to clarify the uncertainty about the source. Also, 'from my neighbor' was repeated unnecessarily. The correction improves clarity and grammatical structure.

× I enjoy doing them.

✓ I enjoy doing it.

The pronoun 'them' incorrectly refers to 'chatting', which is singular. The correct singular pronoun is 'it' to match the singular noun 'chatting'.

× I chat about things that concerns us basically most of the time.

✓ I chat about things that concern us basically most of the time.

The verb 'concerns' should be in plural form 'concern' to agree with the plural noun 'things'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to verb form.

× our wedding is coming up and majorly what we chat about is how we're gonna get our hair done, makeup, and also look good on that day.

✓ our wedding is coming up and mainly what we chat about is how we're going to get our hair done, makeup done, and also look good on that day.

'Gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'going to' in formal speech. Also, 'majorly' is incorrect here; 'mainly' is the correct adverb. 'Makeup' should be paired with 'done' for parallel structure.

× Excited.

✓ I am excited.

The sentence fragment 'Excited.' lacks a subject and verb. It should be a complete sentence 'I am excited.' to be grammatically correct.

× I tend to share my daily life to her, which I wouldn't like to share with many people.

✓ I tend to share my daily life with her, which I wouldn't like to share with many people.

The verb 'share' is followed by the preposition 'with', not 'to'. Using 'to' here is incorrect.

× My cousin is interesting question.

✓ My cousin, that's an interesting question.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding a phrase to acknowledge the question makes it a complete and meaningful sentence.

× Also communicating social through social media EJ Instagram also can enable our communication.

✓ Also, communicating socially through social media, e.g., Instagram, can enable our communication.

'Communicating social' is incorrect; the adverb form 'socially' is needed. 'EJ' should be 'e.g.' to mean 'for example'. Commas improve readability.

× I give my friends often not to fight with them but to share my opinion and also listen to theirs.

✓ I often tell my friends not to fight but to share opinions and also listen to theirs.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. Rephrasing improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I go can bring.

✓ I can bring it up.

The original phrase is incomplete and unclear. The corrected sentence completes the thought with proper modal verb usage and object.