Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat natural but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. For example, say "I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us build a strong connection."

Exemplo: I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us build a strong connection and share our thoughts.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to improve coherence and be more specific about the topics. For example, "We usually talk about various subjects like school, hobbies, and current events, and our conversations often last a long time."

Exemplo: We usually talk about various subjects like school, hobbies, and current events, and our conversations often last a long time.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Also, add linking words to connect ideas. For example, "I prefer chatting with a group because it brings diverse ideas, which helps us solve problems more effectively."

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group because it brings diverse ideas, which helps us solve problems more effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. For example, "Although face-to-face communication is important, I prefer social media because it is more convenient and allows me to stay connected anytime."

Exemplo: Although face-to-face communication is important, I prefer social media because it is more convenient and allows me to stay connected anytime.

Sugestão: Your answer has a confusing phrase "seldom have agreements" which likely means "seldom have arguments." Be careful with word choice. Also, avoid redundancy and improve clarity. For example, "I rarely argue with my friends, but when we do, it's normal and we always make up quickly."

Exemplo: I rarely argue with my friends, but when we do, it's normal and we always make up quickly.

× It's a very enjoyable chatting with my friend and I cherish every moment I share with my friends, so I think this is a process that we can develop connection.

✓ It's very enjoyable to chat with my friends and I cherish every moment I share with them, so I think this is a process through which we can develop connections.

The phrase 'a very enjoyable chatting' is incorrect because 'chatting' is a gerund and should not be preceded by an article and adjective like 'a very enjoyable'. Instead, use 'very enjoyable to chat'. Also, 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match the context. 'Develop connection' should be plural 'develop connections' to indicate multiple relationships. Additionally, 'with my friends' is better than 'with my friend' to match plural usage.

× My friends and I have endless topics to talk about. We don't have a fixed topic and once we start talking we it's not easily for us to end the topic or end the discussion.

✓ My friends and I have endless topics to talk about. We don't have a fixed topic, and once we start talking, it's not easy for us to end the topic or the discussion.

The sentence 'once we start talking we it's not easily for us' is ungrammatical. The phrase 'we it's' is incorrect; it should be 'it's'. Also, 'not easily' should be 'not easy' because 'easy' is an adjective describing the situation. Commas are needed after 'topic' and 'talking' to separate clauses properly.

× Well, from my perspective, a group of people might be a good choice because when we are in class, a group of people will bring a lot of ideas and help us to solve problems.

✓ Well, from my perspective, a group of people might be a good choice because when we are in class, groups of people bring a lot of ideas and help us solve problems.

Repeating 'a group of people' twice is redundant; using 'groups of people' in plural better fits the general statement. Also, 'help us to solve problems' can be simplified to 'help us solve problems' for natural English usage.

× Well, although I do agree that face to face conversations are very important in our life, social media might be a better way to communicate because it's very convenient.

✓ Well, although I do agree that face-to-face conversations are very important in our lives, social media might be a better way to communicate because it's very convenient.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. 'In our life' should be plural 'in our lives' because it refers to life in general for multiple people.

× I seldom have agreements with my friends, but I have to admit that we do have some arguments, but it's very normal. We always make up quickly.

✓ I seldom have disagreements with my friends, but I have to admit that we do have some arguments, which is very normal. We always make up quickly.

The phrase 'I seldom have agreements' is incorrect because 'agreements' means consensus, which contradicts the intended meaning. The correct word is 'disagreements'. Also, 'but it's very normal' is better expressed as 'which is very normal' to connect the ideas smoothly.