Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp từ.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me feel relaxed and comfortable. I usually talk to them whenever we have free time, which strengthens our friendship.

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn về chủ đề bạn thường nói chuyện với bạn bè. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ liên kết để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: I usually chat with my friends about our daily activities and hobbies. After school, we often talk about playing games or going for a walk to relax and improve our conversations.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trình bày ý kiến một cách mạch lạc, giải thích lý do cụ thể và tránh dùng từ không phù hợp.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I feel more comfortable and less shy. Talking in a group helps me express myself better than one-on-one conversations.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và chú ý ngữ pháp. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn lý do bạn thích giao tiếp trực tiếp và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it helps improve relationships and makes conversations more enjoyable and meaningful.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích rõ ràng về việc bạn có hay tranh luận với bạn bè không và tại sao.

Exemplo: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions. However, I try to listen and understand their points to resolve the disagreements peacefully.

× I spend more times to chat with them, they feel very friendly and more comfortable so I chatting with them when they have a free times I.

✓ I spend more time chatting with them; they feel very friendly and more comfortable, so I chat with them when they have free time.

The word 'times' should be singular 'time' when referring to an amount of time. Also, 'chatting' should be used correctly as a verb form, and 'a free times' should be 'free time' without article 'a'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I spend more times to chat with them, they feel very friendly and more comfortable so I chatting with them when they have a free times I.

✓ I spend more time chatting with them; they feel very friendly and more comfortable, so I chat with them when they have free time.

After 'spend', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'chatting' is correct instead of 'to chat'.

× I chatting with them when they have a free times I.

✓ I chat with them when they have free time.

The phrase 'a free times' is incorrect; 'time' is uncountable here and should not have 'a' or be plural.

× I invite them to playing games and walk walk a conversation to improve.

✓ I invite them to play games and walk to improve conversation.

After 'invite someone to', the verb should be in base form, not '-ing' form, so 'play' is correct instead of 'playing'.

× I invite them to playing games and walk walk a conversation to improve.

✓ I invite them to play games and take walks to improve our conversations.

The phrase 'walk walk a conversation to improve' is unclear and ungrammatical. It should be rephrased to 'take walks to improve our conversations' for clarity and correctness.

× In my opinion, I think I will chat with a group of people because I'm shy and I'm very serious about the person who is very scary and very bad temper.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer to chat with a group of people because I'm shy, and I find serious people with bad tempers scary.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear references. 'I'm very serious about the person' is incorrect; it should express the speaker's feelings about others. Also, 'very bad temper' should be 'bad tempers'.

× I think we need to communicate face to face because it's improve the relationship and have fun when we talk about the topics.

✓ I think we need to communicate face to face because it improves relationships and is fun when we talk about topics.

'It's improve' is incorrect; it should be 'it improves'. Also, 'the relationship' should be plural 'relationships' or no article. 'Have fun' needs a subject 'is' to be correct.

× Yes, sometimes I have argue with my friends every I have the topics they will give me the answer so the answer a lot, but I really difficult to.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends. Whenever I have topics, they give me many answers, but I find it really difficult.

'Have argue' is incorrect; the correct form is 'argue'. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; it needs to be split and rephrased for clarity. 'I really difficult to' is incomplete and should be 'I find it really difficult'.