Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is quite long and a bit repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and clear by directly answering the question first, then adding one or two specific supporting details. Also, avoid awkward phrasing like 'distance before'.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us bond. For example, I often talk with classmates I don't see often to share stories and stay connected.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by directly answering the question and using linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating 'social media platform' and try to use more varied vocabulary.

Exemplo: Usually, I chat with my friends about TikTok because we all enjoy watching funny videos there. It’s a popular source of entertainment among students at my school.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly with correct grammar and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because it allows me to talk to everyone, including classmates I’m not close with. This way, I can get to know them better.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant or confusing information (mentioning 'China' without context). Focus on giving a clear reason why you prefer face-to-face communication and avoid unrelated details. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more personal and trustworthy. Social media can be risky since you never know who is really behind the screen.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions like 'extremely heartbreak'. Try to express your ideas clearly and correctly, and use linking words to explain your reasons.

Exemplo: I rarely argue with my friends because we share a strong bond. We have been through difficult times together, which makes our friendship very close.

× especially with those whom I'm not close with, such as my classmate, where I don't get to talk to them very often about my daily life or share stories with that would bring us closer despite the distance before.

✓ especially with those whom I'm not close with, such as my classmates, whom I don't get to talk to very often about my daily life or share stories with that would bring us closer despite the distance before.

The pronoun 'whom' should refer to 'classmates' (plural), so 'my classmate' should be plural 'my classmates' to match the pronoun and context. Also, 'where' is incorrectly used; 'whom' is more appropriate for people. This correction improves clarity and grammatical agreement.

× I would most likely talk about the social media platform called TikTok where I am able to see funny videos and it's a source of entertainment that we all share as a student in my school.

✓ I would most likely talk about the social media platform called TikTok where I am able to see funny videos and it's a source of entertainment that we all share as students in my school.

The phrase 'as a student' should be plural 'as students' because it refers to 'we all', which is plural. This ensures subject-verb agreement and consistency in number.

× I prefer to chat with a group of friends because it gave me a chance to talk to them individually and getting to know them better, especially those who am I not close with such as my classmate because I'm not able to talk to them all the time and this gives me a purpose to talk to them.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of friends because it gives me a chance to talk to them individually and get to know them better, especially those whom I am not close with such as my classmates because I'm not able to talk to them all the time and this gives me a purpose to talk to them.

The verb 'gave' should be present tense 'gives' to match 'I prefer' (present). 'Getting' should be 'get' to maintain parallel structure with 'to talk'. 'Who am I not close with' is incorrect; it should be 'whom I am not close with'. Also, 'my classmate' should be plural 'my classmates' to match context.

× especially those who am I not close with such as my classmate because I'm not able to talk to them all the time and this gives me a purpose to talk to them.

✓ especially those whom I am not close to, such as my classmates, because I'm not able to talk to them all the time and this gives me a purpose to talk to them.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used after 'close'; the correct preposition is 'to'. Also, 'who am I not close with' is incorrect word order; it should be 'whom I am not close to'.

× In my opinion, I would prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me to talk to them in real life and not by social media, because the social media platform is extremely scary and dangerous since there are a lot of people who are targeting you and China.

✓ In my opinion, I would prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me to talk to them in real life and not through social media, because social media platforms are extremely scary and dangerous since there are a lot of people who are targeting you.

The preposition 'by' is incorrect when referring to communication via social media; 'through' is correct. Also, 'the social media platform' should be plural 'social media platforms' or just 'social media'. The phrase 'and China' is unclear and likely an error, so it is removed for clarity.

× because there's a bond between all of us that is extremely heartbreak because we went through hardship and situation that were difficult together.

✓ because there's a bond between all of us that is extremely heartbreaking because we went through hardships and situations that were difficult together.

'Heartbreak' is a noun; the correct adjective form is 'heartbreaking'. 'Hardship' and 'situation' should be plural 'hardships' and 'situations' to match 'were difficult'. This correction improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.