Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更准确的词汇表达。

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. We talk about many things, such as current events and celebrations. I always have a great time when I meet them.

Sugestão: 回答内容不够连贯，句子结构混乱，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并具体说明聊天内容。

Exemplo: We usually chat about various topics, including current affairs, interesting news, and funny videos. When I find something interesting on short videos, I often share it with my friends.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子并使用恰当的连接词，使表达更自然。

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of people because brainstorming with many friends helps me get more ideas. It also inspires my imagination and creativity.

Sugestão: 回答中表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议明确表达偏好并说明原因，避免使用不准确的词汇。

Exemplo: I prefer to communicate via social media because it is convenient. I can send messages anytime and anywhere, which suits my busy schedule.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，建议简洁表达并使用更准确的词汇，同时避免口头语。

Exemplo: I rarely argue with my friends because I usually try to compromise. Sometimes, I gently suggest solutions to help us reach an agreement.

× Yes, I really enjoy your chatting with friends.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends.

这里的“your”使用不正确，应该直接用动名词“chatting”表示喜欢聊天的行为，而不是“your chatting”。

× We almost talk about everything goes on the celebrated and talk about the public affairs.

✓ We almost talk about everything that goes on in the celebration and talk about public affairs.

句子结构不完整，缺少关系代词“that”，并且“celebrated”应为名词“celebration”，且介词使用错误，应为“in the celebration”。

× We cannot stop when I meet with friends.

✓ We cannot stop when I meet friends.

“meet with friends”中“with”多余，通常说“meet friends”。

× We almost chat about everything, such as the public affairs.

✓ We almost chat about everything, such as public affairs.

“the public affairs”中“the”不必要，公共事务一般不加冠词。

× Celebrated gospel and any funny things.

✓ We also talk about celebrated gospel and any funny things.

该句为不完整句，应与前句连接，形成完整句子。

× Every time I scroll on short video and show what I'm interested in, I will directly message to my friends.

✓ Every time I scroll through short videos and show what I'm interested in, I will directly message my friends.

“scroll on”应为“scroll through”，“message to my friends”中“to”多余，直接用“message my friends”。

× Well, as a people person, I prefer chatting with a group of people 'cause it can help me get more ideas through the brainstorm with amount of people and it can inspire my imagination and help me more creative.

✓ Well, as a people person, I prefer chatting with a group of people because it can help me get more ideas through brainstorming with a number of people, and it can inspire my imagination and help me be more creative.

“amount of people”应为“a number of people”；“brainstorm”应为动名词“brainstorming”；“help me more creative”应为“help me be more creative”。

× Well I have a social figure so I would like to communicate via social media and it's convenient for me to type anything and I can leave message at any time anywhere to my friends don't like.

✓ Well, I have a social nature, so I would like to communicate via social media. It's convenient for me to type anything, and I can leave messages at any time and anywhere to my friends I like.

“social figure”应为“social nature”；“leave message”应为“leave messages”；“to my friends don't like”结构错误，应为“to my friends I like”。

× Oh, I seldom have fight with my friends 'cause I'm only one to make compromise with my friends, uh, But sometimes I may put forward some gentle suggestion to, uh, help us better make make a deal.

✓ Oh, I seldom have fights with my friends because I'm the only one to make compromises with them. But sometimes I may put forward some gentle suggestions to help us better make a deal.

“have fight”应为“have fights”；“I'm only one”应为“I'm the only one”；“make compromise”应为“make compromises”；“some gentle suggestion”应为“some gentle suggestions”；重复“make make”应去掉一个。