Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains several hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating your opinion and supporting it with clear reasons. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and use correct vocabulary, for example, 'deep conversations' instead of 'deep conservation'.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us build trust and understand each other better. We often have deep conversations about life, which strengthens our friendship.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear vocabulary such as 'Fuhrende'. Try to answer directly with clear topics you discuss and explain why. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: We usually talk about academic subjects and travel plans because we are interested in taking courses abroad. These topics are relevant to our daily lives and future goals.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains hesitations and incomplete sentences. Try to express your preference clearly and support it with specific reasons. Use correct phrases like 'body language' instead of 'somebody language'.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend because I enjoy making eye contact and observing body language. This helps me understand my friend more deeply.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to state your preference clearly and explain why face-to-face communication is better, using correct vocabulary and linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because I value eye contact and body language. These help me understand my friends better compared to social media.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Try to answer directly and explain why arguments happen and how you resolve them. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, we usually resolve our disagreements quickly by apologising and discussing the issues calmly.

× I like chatting with my friends because we'll trust daily and umm know more about others and umm, here we'll talk some deep conservation in the life.

✓ I like chatting with my friends because we trust each other daily and, umm, know more about others and, umm, here we talk about some deep conversations in life.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'we'll trust' which is a future tense modal verb, but the intended meaning is a habitual action, so simple present 'we trust' is correct. Also, 'talk some deep conservation' is incorrect; it should be 'talk about some deep conversations' to use the correct verb-preposition combination and plural noun form.

× We will talk about the topic on Fuhrende in Academic umm traveling because we want to take a course so we will chat with this topic in the our life daily.

✓ We will talk about the topic of Fuhrende in Academic, umm, traveling because we want to take a course, so we will chat about this topic in our daily life.

The phrase 'talk about the topic on' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'about the topic of'. Also, 'chat with this topic' is incorrect; it should be 'chat about this topic'. The article 'the' before 'our life' is unnecessary and incorrect.

× I prefer to chat with A1 friend because I like the eye contact and umm somebody language and.

✓ I prefer to chat with one friend because I like eye contact and, umm, body language.

The phrase 'A1 friend' is unclear and likely a mishearing; 'one friend' is appropriate. 'Somebody language' is incorrect; the correct term is 'body language'. Also, 'the eye contact' should be 'eye contact' without 'the' as it is uncountable here.

× Yeah, I prefer this to be absolutely, because yeah, I will say that, umm, I like eye contact and all the language. We can know more to conservation. I can know more with my friends.

✓ Yeah, I absolutely prefer this because, umm, I like eye contact and body language. We can have deeper conversations. I can get to know my friends better.

'Prefer this to be absolutely' is awkward; 'absolutely prefer this' is correct. 'All the language' is vague; 'body language' is appropriate. 'Know more to conservation' is incorrect; it should be 'have deeper conversations'. 'Know more with my friends' should be 'get to know my friends better' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes we do, Lenny argues with my friends. Because we have some different points or umm, I feel in the problem or issue. But are we umm, fast to solve the problem and we apologize and.

✓ Yes, we do. I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different points of view or, umm, I feel there is a problem or issue. But we are quick to solve the problem and we apologise.

'Lenny argues with my friends' is unclear and likely a mishearing; 'I sometimes argue with my friends' fits better. 'I feel in the problem or issue' is incorrect; 'I feel there is a problem or issue' is correct. 'Are we umm, fast' should be 'we are quick'. 'Apologize and' is incomplete; 'we apologise' is sufficient. Also, 'apologise' is the British English spelling.