Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is good but a bit long and has some unclear phrases like 'long day week' and 'hang up' which can confuse the listener. Try to be more concise and use clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially after a busy day. We usually talk about our work, how our day went, and make plans to hang out during the weekend. This helps us relax and have fun together.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'most of her of my friends' and repeated words. Try to speak clearly and use correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Most of my friends are colleagues from university. We often talk about our school days, like presentations that made us nervous because of the large audience. Remembering those times makes us laugh and feel proud that we overcame challenges and found jobs.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but has some repetition like 'most of them them' and could be more concise. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas and improve flow.

Exemplo: Usually, I chat with groups on WhatsApp, but I prefer talking to friends individually. This way, they can share personal experiences and seek advice about their relationships more comfortably.

Sugestão: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammar mistakes like 'the communication is their social media' and 'they communicate'. Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, avoid repeating words like 'being able'.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication with my friends, but due to busy schedules, we mostly use social media. However, when we meet in person, our conversations are more lively and encouraging.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and has many grammatical errors and confusing phrases like 'Circle their public show which was organize incomes' and 'praised a fear'. Try to speak clearly, use correct grammar, and provide a clear example. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, my friends and I sometimes argue during group chats because we have different opinions. For instance, after a recent public show, some were upset that a favorite performer didn't get to perform, while others praised those who did well.

× I really love chatting with friends, especially after a long day week when I close and come back home.

✓ I really love chatting with friends, especially after a long day or week when I close and come back home.

The phrase 'a long day week' is incorrect because it combines two time periods without proper conjunction. Adding 'or' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× When I pick my phone, I do have a long conversation with my friends and we discuss issues about work, how our day went, and we also plan about hanging out during the weekend.

✓ When I pick up my phone, I have a long conversation with my friends and we discuss issues about work, how our day went, and we also plan to hang out during the weekend.

The verb 'pick' should be followed by the preposition 'up' to form the phrasal verb 'pick up'. Also, 'plan about hanging out' is incorrect; it should be 'plan to hang out' because 'plan' is followed by the infinitive form of the verb.

× Most of the time my friends and I do hang up at the end of every week to have fun and to release some stress.

✓ Most of the time my friends and I do hang out at the end of every week to have fun and to relieve some stress.

The phrase 'hang up' means to end a phone call, which is incorrect here. The correct phrase is 'hang out', meaning to spend time together. Also, 'release some stress' should be 'relieve some stress' as 'relieve' is the correct verb for reducing stress.

× Most of her of my friends are my colleagues from tertiary institutions, so during our chat we usually recall activities that happened in school, like presentations where most of us were panic because of the large number of our colleagues.

✓ Most of my friends are my colleagues from tertiary institutions, so during our chat we usually recall activities that happened in school, like presentations where most of us were panicked because of the large number of our colleagues.

The phrase 'Most of her of my friends' is incorrect; 'her' should be removed. Also, 'were panic' is incorrect; the past participle 'panicked' should be used to describe the state of the subjects.

× When we when we recall such situations, we usually laugh and then also praise ourselves for being able to walk through all this hardship and coming out and finding jobs.

✓ When we recall such situations, we usually laugh and then also praise ourselves for being able to walk through all this hardship and come out and find jobs.

The phrase 'coming out and finding jobs' should be in the base form 'come out and find jobs' to maintain parallel structure with 'being able to walk through'.

× But to me I would say it would be more appropriate and I like to chat with them individually because sometimes most of them them wish to share their life experiences and also get some guidance concerning issues affecting their relationship.

✓ But to me I would say it would be more appropriate and I like to chat with them individually because sometimes most of them wish to share their life experiences and also get some guidance concerning issues affecting their relationships.

The repetition 'them them' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'them'. Also, 'relationship' should be plural 'relationships' to agree with 'most of them'.

× So if I talk to them personally.

✓ So I talk to them personally.

The sentence 'So if I talk to them personally.' is incomplete and incorrectly structured. Removing 'if' makes it a complete sentence expressing the intended meaning.

× Personally, I wish I could communicate with all my friends face to face, but because of the nature of work and how busy each and everyone is, most of the time the communication is their social media.

✓ Personally, I wish I could communicate with all my friends face to face, but because of the nature of work and how busy each and every one is, most of the time the communication is through social media.

The phrase 'each and everyone' should be 'each and every one' for correct idiomatic expression. Also, 'the communication is their social media' is incorrect; it should be 'through social media' to indicate the medium of communication.

× But when the opportunity comes for me to meet my friends face to face, they communicate.

✓ But when the opportunity comes for me to meet my friends face to face, we communicate.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrect here because the speaker is included in the communication. 'We' correctly includes both the speaker and friends.

× The conversation become more lively because we are able to see each other and be able being able to encourage each.

✓ The conversation becomes more lively because we are able to see each other and be able to encourage each other.

'Become' should be 'becomes' to agree with singular subject 'conversation'. The phrase 'be able being able to encourage each' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'be able to encourage each other'.

× My friends and I argue a lot especially when we're having a group conversation because this is because most of us have different thoughts concerning different issue.

✓ My friends and I argue a lot especially when we're having a group conversation because most of us have different thoughts concerning different issues.

The phrase 'this is because' is redundant and should be removed. Also, 'different issue' should be plural 'different issues' to agree with 'different thoughts'.

× An example is the just ended Circle their public show which was organize incomes.

✓ An example is the just-ended Circle public show which was organized in Kumasi.

'Just ended' should be hyphenated as 'just-ended' when used as an adjective. 'Organize incomes' is incorrect; it should be 'organized in Kumasi' (assuming 'incomes' is a mishearing or typo for 'Kumasi' or a place).

× Some friends of mine were a fan of Jackie who didn't get the opportunity to perform.

✓ Some friends of mine were fans of Jackie who didn't get the opportunity to perform.

'Some friends' is plural, so 'a fan' should be plural 'fans' to agree in number.

× They were really mad at circle.

✓ They were really mad at Circle.

'circle' should be capitalized as it is a proper noun referring to a specific event or group.

× The others 2 praised a fear who did a very good performance so.

✓ The other two praised a performer who did a very good performance.

'Others 2' is incorrect; it should be 'other two'. 'A fear' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'a performer'. The sentence should be completed properly without 'so' at the end.