Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

× Yes, I really like to chat with my friends be because it can brings a lot of happiness to me and uh, and also relax my uh, pleasure and even uh, boost uh, us the relationship.

✓ Yes, I really like to chat with my friends because it can bring a lot of happiness to me and also relax my mood and even boost our relationship.

这里的动词 'brings' 与主语 'it' 不匹配，应该用原形 'bring'。此外，'boost us the relationship' 结构不正确，应改为 'boost our relationship'。另外，'relax my pleasure' 表达不自然，改为 'relax my mood' 更合适。

× Actually, we often talk about some beautiful clothes and some interesting stuffs, but we also like to talk about some gossip because it it it is really interesting in our busy daily life.

✓ Actually, we often talk about some beautiful clothes and some interesting stuff, but we also like to talk about some gossip because it is really interesting in our busy daily life.

'stuffs' 是不可数名词 'stuff' 的错误复数形式，应使用单数形式。

× Actually I have 3 best friends so I always talk with them about for a group of people, I don't want to talk with them because I don't, uh, familiar with them. So, uh, I, I don't often to talk a lot with them.

✓ Actually, I have 3 best friends, so I always talk with them. As for a group of people, I don't want to talk with them because I am not familiar with them. So, I don't often talk a lot with them.

句子结构混乱，'talk with them about for a group of people' 不通顺，应拆分为多个句子。'I don't, uh, familiar with them' 缺少动词，应改为 'I am not familiar with them'。'I don't often to talk' 中 'to' 多余，应去掉。

× Well, I'd like to communicate face to face because I can clearly express my ideas and I can talk with them better. But when I'm a little bit a little busy, I would like to prefer the social media because I don't have plenty of time to talk with them.

✓ Well, I'd like to communicate face to face because I can clearly express my ideas and I can talk with them better. But when I'm a little busy, I prefer social media because I don't have much time to talk with them.

'a little bit a little busy' 表达重复，应简化为 'a little busy'。'would like to prefer' 结构不正确，应直接用 'prefer'。'have plenty of time' 与否定句搭配不当，应改为 'don't have much time'。

× While I don't argue with my friends because all my friends are all my from the childhood so I don't agree with my friends but when I was a child I often argue with them.

✓ I don't argue with my friends because all my friends have been with me since childhood, so I don't disagree with my friends. But when I was a child, I often argued with them.

'all my friends are all my from the childhood' 语法错误，应改为 'all my friends have been with me since childhood'。'I don't agree with my friends' 语义不清，推测应为 'I don't disagree with my friends'。过去时态 'argue' 应改为 'argued'。