Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it has some redundancy and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating the same idea in different words and keep your answer within 4-5 sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I love chatting with my friends because it helps us stay close despite the distance. Moreover, it is a great way to pass time and maintain our relationships effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer covers the topic but lacks fluency and contains many fillers like 'uh'. Try to reduce fillers and use more specific examples. Also, organise your answer with linking words to make it coherent and avoid vague phrases like 'every topic' or 'everything'.

Exemplo: I usually chat with my friends about daily activities, such as our plans for school or trips. For instance, we often discuss whether to plan or cancel a trip, which helps us stay updated and coordinate better.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and informal expressions like 'Uh cause'. Try to use formal linking words such as 'because' or 'since' and correct sentence structures. Also, avoid repetition and be concise.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a single person because the conversation becomes more meaningful and focused. In contrast, group chats can be distracting as people often discuss different topics simultaneously.

Sugestão: Your answer conveys your opinion but has unclear phrases like 'I'm getting through social'. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because social media often leads to misunderstandings. In person, we can observe emotions, which makes conversations more meaningful and focused.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases such as 'I are you with my friends' and 'whether what means should we have'. Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, organise your answer with a topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends about small matters, like what to eat or whether to go to school. However, these disagreements usually help us understand each other better and strengthen our friendship.

× I prefer chatting with a single person either in a group of people because chatting with a single person means our conversation will be more meaningful and focused.

✓ I prefer chatting with a single person rather than in a group of people because chatting with a single person means our conversation will be more meaningful and focused.

The phrase 'either in a group of people' is incorrectly used here. The correct conjunction to contrast two options is 'rather than' instead of 'either'. This is a sentence structure issue related to conjunction use, but since 'either' is part of the verb phrase context, it is best corrected by replacing 'either' with 'rather than' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Uh cause in a group of people, some people will talk about another thing while other will be talking about another thing which will create distraction and lose the main motive of the chat.

✓ Uh cause in a group of people, some people will talk about one thing while others will be talking about another thing which will create distraction and lose the main motive of the chat.

The word 'other' should be plural 'others' to agree with the plural subject 'some people'. This is a singular and plural issue where the pronoun must match the number of the noun it refers to.

× Yes, I are you with my friends sometimes we often had to have disagreement about small topics like whether what means should we have, whether we should go to school tomorrow or not.

✓ Yes, I argue with my friends sometimes. We often have disagreements about small topics like what meal we should have, whether we should go to school tomorrow or not.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'I are you' is incorrect; it should be 'I argue'. Also, 'had to have disagreement' is incorrect; it should be 'have disagreements'. The verb must agree with the subject in number and person. Additionally, 'whether what means should we have' is unclear and corrected to 'what meal we should have' for clarity and correctness.