Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to use more natural phrasing and correct grammar, such as 'chit chat' to 'chit-chat' and 'my friend' to 'my friends'. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, use 'It doesn't need to be long or deep; even a small chat can show care and support.'

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy chit-chatting with my friends in my spare time or whenever I catch up with them because it's an important way to stay connected with their daily lives. It's also a great way to show my support and affection. It doesn't need to be long or deep; even a small chat can show care and support throughout the day.

Sugestão: Improve coherence by using linking words and correct grammar, such as 'depending on the type of friend' and 'we talk about'. Also, replace vague words like 'certain stuff' with more specific terms. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'in contrast' to make your answer more logical.

Exemplo: It depends on the type of friend and the conversation. For example, with close friends, we talk about more personal and deep topics like our relationships, mental health, or daily life. Sometimes we even discuss our perspectives on the world. In contrast, with classmates or casual friends, we usually talk about our lives and share hobbies.

Sugestão: Focus on clarity and correct minor errors like 'read the listen to each other' to 'listen to each other'. Use linking words like 'however' appropriately and avoid redundancy. Also, try to keep sentences concise and avoid mixing ideas in one sentence.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend at a time because it allows for more meaningful and focused conversations. When it's just two people, we can listen to each other and share our thoughts openly. However, group chats can sometimes become chaotic, making it harder to have deeper or personal discussions. Still, group discussions are important for building new friendships.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and sentence structure for clarity. For example, replace 'it is more spiritual' with 'it feels more personal' and correct repeated words. Use linking words to contrast ideas clearly, such as 'although' and 'however'.

Exemplo: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication. It feels more personal and allows for visual cues, unlike social media, which is convenient and instant but lacks emotional connection and physical presence. When communicating face-to-face, it's easier to understand each other's feelings.

Sugestão: Use correct grammar and smoother transitions. For example, say 'arguments with friends are not destructive' and 'arguing, when done respectfully, can deepen conversations and improve friendships.' Avoid repetition and clarify ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I believe that arguments with friends are not destructive; in fact, they can be beneficial. Arguing respectfully can deepen our conversations and strengthen our friendships. Therefore, I often engage in discussions with friends on various topics.

× I enjoy chit chat with my friend in my spare time or whenever I catch up with them because I think it is an important way to communicate and catch up with their daily life.

✓ I enjoy chit chat with my friends in my spare time or whenever I catch up with them because I think it is an important way to communicate and catch up with their daily lives.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the plural pronoun 'them'. Also, 'daily life' should be plural 'daily lives' to correspond to multiple friends' lives.

× Also is a great way to show my support and my love towards them.

✓ It is also a great way to show my support and my love towards them.

The sentence is missing the subject 'It' at the beginning. Adding 'It' clarifies the subject and corrects the sentence structure.

× It don't need to be long and deep, a small chat can bring you from a lot of love throughout daily.

✓ It doesn't need to be long and deep; a small chat can bring you a lot of love throughout the day.

The subject 'It' requires the verb 'doesn't' instead of 'don't'. Also, 'from a lot of love' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of love'. 'Throughout daily' is incomplete and should be 'throughout the day'.

× If it is with close friends, we will talk about something more personal and deep like our relationships, our mental health or our daily life.

✓ If it is with close friends, we will talk about something more personal and deep like our relationships, our mental health, or our daily lives.

The phrase 'our daily life' should be plural 'our daily lives' to refer to multiple individuals' lives.

× If it's just with classmates or normal friends, it will just talk about our lives and share hobbies.

✓ If it's just with classmates or normal friends, we will just talk about our lives and share hobbies.

The subject 'it' is incorrect here; it should be 'we' to match the plural subject performing the action.

× When it's just two people, we can read the listen to each other and share our thoughts openly.

✓ When it's just two people, we can listen to each other and share our thoughts openly.

The phrase 'read the listen to each other' is incorrect. 'Read the' should be removed to correct the sentence.

× However, group discussion is important to build up new friendship in the newfound group.

✓ However, group discussions are important to build up new friendships in the newfound group.

'Group discussion' should be plural 'group discussions' to generalize the statement. 'Friendship' should be plural 'friendships' to match the plural context.

× Definitely face to face.

✓ Definitely face-to-face.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adverb or adjective.

× But it's lack of emotion and lack of actual physical touch and experience when you are communicating when when communicating face to face it is easier to feel the feelings of each other.

✓ But it lacks emotion and lacks actual physical touch and experience; when communicating face-to-face, it is easier to feel each other's feelings.

'It's lack' is incorrect; it should be 'it lacks' to match subject-verb agreement. The sentence is also repetitive and needs restructuring for clarity. 'When when' is a typo and should be corrected to 'when'. 'Feel the feelings of each other' is better expressed as 'feel each other's feelings'.

× I believe that argument with friend is not a destructive interaction.

✓ I believe that an argument with a friend is not a destructive interaction.

The sentence is missing the articles 'an' before 'argument' and 'a' before 'friend' to be grammatically correct.

× In contrast, I believe is beneficial.

✓ In contrast, I believe it is beneficial.

The sentence is missing the pronoun 'it' after 'believe' to complete the clause.

× Arguing but not fighting can bring you thoughts and conversation into a deeper level and can improve your friendships.

✓ Arguing, but not fighting, can bring your thoughts and conversations to a deeper level and can improve your friendships.

Commas are needed around 'but not fighting' to clarify the sentence. 'Bring you thoughts and conversation into a deeper level' is incorrect; it should be 'bring your thoughts and conversations to a deeper level'.