ChattingPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you like chatting with friends?

Candidato

Usually I don't like chatting with friends because I'm an introvert person and I think chatting is somewhat a waste of time because when I myself think deeply or read some books I think I get more improvement than chatting.

Examinador

What do you usually chat about with friends?

Candidato

Me and my friends are both foodies so we usually chat about the newly opened restaurants or some delicious dessert. Also we share about the cupcakes that these jobs offer so we can enjoy food together.

Examinador

Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

Candidato

I prefer to chat with a group of people because I am weak in chatting. So I usually have some output stopping a when chatting with one people, but when chatting with a group they can pick on the topic.

Examinador

Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?

Candidato

I prefer to communicate via social media because when chatting in the social media you can use some emojis or pictures to express your feeling. But when chatting face to face, you have to pay attention to your body language, eye contact and other things which are challenging.

Examinador

Do you argue with friends?

Candidato

I seldom argue with friends because we can always reach an agreement. Our only argue is on some math problems because both of us would think our solution is correct and we argue to explain the solution to help us.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like chatting with friends?

Pontuação: 70.0

Sugestão: 回答时应更自然流畅,避免重复表达“我认为”,并且句子结构应更简洁。可以增加一些具体细节来支持观点。

Exemplo: I usually don't enjoy chatting with friends because I'm an introvert. I prefer spending time reading books or thinking deeply, which I find more beneficial for my personal growth.

What do you usually chat about with friends?

Pontuação: 75.0

Sugestão: 回答中应注意语法和表达的准确性,如“these jobs”应为“these shops”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯,并提供更具体的例子。

Exemplo: My friends and I are food lovers, so we often talk about newly opened restaurants and delicious desserts. For example, we recently shared information about a bakery offering special cupcakes, which we planned to try together.

Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,应注意句子结构和用词准确。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅,并具体说明原因。

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group because I sometimes struggle to keep a conversation going with just one person. In a group, others can easily pick up the topic and keep the discussion lively.

Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?

Pontuação: 80.0

Sugestão: 回答较好,但可以更自然地表达观点,避免重复“chatting”。建议增加连接词使句子更连贯,并举例说明。

Exemplo: I prefer communicating via social media because I can use emojis and pictures to express my feelings easily. On the other hand, face-to-face communication requires attention to body language and eye contact, which I find challenging.

Do you argue with friends?

Pontuação: 75.0

Sugestão: 回答中“argue”用法不当,应使用“argument”或“disagreement”。建议句子更简洁,逻辑更清晰,并提供具体例子。

Exemplo: I rarely argue with my friends because we usually agree on most things. However, we sometimes have friendly disagreements over math problems, where we each try to explain our solutions to help each other understand better.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because I am weak in chatting. So I usually have some output stopping a when chatting with one people, but when chatting with a group they can pick on the topic.

I prefer to chat with a group of people because I am weak in chatting. So I usually have some output stopping when chatting with one person, but when chatting with a group they can pick on the topic.

这里的“one people”是错误的,people是复数形式,表示“人们”,单数形式应该用“person”。因此应改为“one person”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× But when chatting face to face, you have to pay attention to your body language, eye contact and other things which are challenging.

But when chatting face-to-face, you have to pay attention to your body language, eye contact and other things which are challenging.

“face to face”作为形容词短语修饰动词“chatting”时,应使用连字符连接,变成“face-to-face”,表示“面对面地”。

Singular and plural issue

× Our only argue is on some math problems because both of us would think our solution is correct and we argue to explain the solution to help us.

Our only argument is on some math problems because both of us would think our solution is correct and we argue to explain the solution to help us.

“argue”是动词,这里需要名词形式,表示“争论”,应使用“argument”。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Usually I don't like chatting with friends because I'm an introvert person and I think chatting is somewhat a waste of time because when I myself think deeply or read some books I think I get more improvement than chatting.

Usually I don't like chatting with friends because I'm an introverted person and I think chatting is somewhat a waste of time because when I think deeply or read some books I think I get more improvement than chatting.

“introvert person”应改为“introverted person”,因为“introverted”是形容词,修饰名词“person”。另外,“when I myself think deeply”中“myself”多余,应去掉。

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