Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and coherent by avoiding repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why you enjoy chatting with friends.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me feel connected and supported, especially when I'm feeling bored or down.

Sugestão: Provide a clearer and more structured answer by directly stating common topics and using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and improve grammar for clarity.

Exemplo: We usually chat about various topics, such as school subjects or personal issues. For example, if I don't understand something in class, I call my friend to clarify it.

Sugestão: Make your answer more coherent and grammatically correct. Clearly explain your preference with specific reasons and avoid incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I believe a single good friend can offer more meaningful help than a large group.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear opinion with supporting reasons, using linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand body language and connect more deeply with others, although social media is also convenient.

Sugestão: Improve fluency by reducing hesitation and correcting grammar. Use linking words to structure your answer and provide specific details about how you resolve arguments.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions or misunderstandings. However, these disagreements are usually minor and don't last long because we communicate openly to resolve them.

× Yes, I love to chat with my friends because it's connecting, connecting more and more and whenever I board or I am depressed and I'm chatting with my friends.

✓ Yes, I love to chat with my friends because it helps me connect more and more, especially whenever I feel bored or depressed and I'm chatting with my friends.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'connecting' as a noun or adjective without proper structure. The verb 'connect' should be used in a form that fits the sentence meaning, such as 'helps me connect'. Also, 'board' is a misspelling of 'bored'. The sentence is corrected to improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, there is no specific topic. Whenever I need anything like I didn't understand the topic, I called my friend so checked with them, they are clear and the topic about it.

✓ Well, there is no specific topic. Whenever I need help, like when I don't understand a topic, I call my friend to check with them so they can explain it clearly.

The original sentence has tense inconsistency and awkward phrasing. 'I didn't understand' should be present tense 'I don't understand' to match the habitual action. Also, 'called' should be 'call' to indicate present habitual action. The phrase 'they are clear and the topic about it' is unclear and corrected to 'so they can explain it clearly' for clarity and correctness.

× So well, I prefer to chat with only one friend, because I believe that one person, one good person can help you very much other so many people, group of people, for instance, MY1 friend told me.

✓ So well, I prefer to chat with only one friend because I believe that one good person can help you much more than many people or a group of people. For instance, one friend told me.

The original sentence has issues with singular and plural forms and unclear phrasing. 'Other so many people' is incorrect; it should be 'much more than many people'. 'MY1 friend' seems to be a typo and is corrected to 'one friend'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Uh, so, well, uh, I prefer both, but uh, my personal opinion will be communicate with face to face because you have to understand and body language. They connected with you. What was do they say to about you? You can connect more rather than.

✓ Uh, so, well, I prefer both, but my personal opinion is to communicate face to face because you can understand body language. It connects with you. You can connect more than through other means.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and has unclear phrasing. 'Communicate with face to face' should be 'communicate face to face'. 'They connected with you' is corrected to 'It connects with you' referring to body language. The sentence 'What was do they say to about you?' is unclear and omitted for clarity. The phrase 'You can connect more rather than' is incomplete and corrected to 'You can connect more than through other means'.

× Yes, sometimes I argued in my friends with my friends especially who when we have umm, different opinions or misunderstood each other.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions or misunderstand each other.

The original sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'argued' when present tense 'argue' is appropriate to describe habitual actions. Also, 'argued in my friends with my friends' is incorrect; it should be 'argue with my friends'. The phrase 'especially who when' is corrected to 'especially when' for clarity.

× However, this disagreement are usually minor and don't last long because we uh, communicate openly to resolve them and overall I think arguing occasionally.

✓ However, these disagreements are usually minor and don't last long because we communicate openly to resolve them. Overall, I think arguing occasionally is normal.

The original sentence has a singular/plural mismatch: 'this disagreement are' should be 'these disagreements are' to agree in number. The sentence is also incomplete at the end; 'arguing occasionally' needs a verb to complete the thought, so 'is normal' is added for clarity.