Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够自然流畅，存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，明确表达观点，并使用恰当的连接词。

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and learn new things. For example, talking with them broadens my horizons and relieves my work stress.

Sugestão: 回答结构混乱，表达不清晰，缺少连贯的连接词。建议直接回答问题，使用清晰的句子，并用连接词组织内容。

Exemplo: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives and problems. Sometimes, we also share interesting news or stories that we find amusing.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，注意语法正确，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend because it helps me concentrate better. When I talk to a group, I often get distracted and find it hard to focus.

Sugestão: 回答较好，但句子未完整，表达略显重复。建议注意句子完整性，避免重复表达，并使用更多连接词。

Exemplo: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because I can see facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand better. Also, it makes me feel closer to the other person.

Sugestão: 回答表达不清，语法错误较多，句子不完整。建议用完整句子表达观点，注意语法和逻辑连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, after arguing, we usually understand each other better and become closer.

× Firstly, January's friends can expand my horizon and secondly, friends are a great diversion to release my pressure from the workplace.

✓ Firstly, friends can expand my horizon and secondly, friends are a great diversion to release my pressure from the workplace.

句中“January's friends”不符合语境，应为“friends”。“January's friends”意思不明确，且不符合上下文。

× Thirdly, chatting with friends can always open.

✓ Thirdly, chatting with friends can always open my mind.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，导致表达不清。应补充宾语使句子完整。

× Well, friends of mine, a great variety to different friends, we would have different topics, but in most cases we would like to chat about our life problems and also our, uh, funds or interesting stuffs that would like to share with.

✓ Well, friends of mine, a great variety of different friends, we have different topics, but in most cases we like to chat about our life problems and also our funds or interesting stuff that we would like to share.

句子结构混乱，表达不清。应调整词序和句式，使句子通顺。

× ...funds or interesting stuffs that would like to share with.

✓ ...funds or interesting stuff that we would like to share.

“stuffs”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式，应改为“stuff”。

× chatting with one friend can makes me concentrated or focus on his words which will be a great training to my mind.

✓ chatting with one friend can make me concentrate on his words which will be a great training to my mind.

助动词can后应接动词原形，不能用第三人称单数形式“makes”。

× Focus if chat with a group of people I will get.

✓ If I chat with a group of people, I will lose focus.

句子结构错误，语序混乱，表达不清。应调整语序并补充缺失成分。

× To me, I definitely would prefer to communicate face to face because I can firstly see his face, facial expressions and his body gestures which can activate my mind and makes me concentrate.

✓ To me, I definitely would prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can firstly see his face, facial expressions and his body gestures which can activate my mind and make me concentrate.

“face to face”作为形容词或副词时应连写为“face-to-face”。另外，主谓一致错误，“makes”应改为“make”。

× ...which can activate my mind and makes me concentrate.

✓ ...which can activate my mind and make me concentrate.

并列谓语中，助动词can后动词应为原形，不能用第三人称单数形式“makes”。

× Secondly, face to face communication makes me feel as feel very close to each other and.

✓ Secondly, face-to-face communication makes me feel very close to each other.

句子末尾多余“as feel”，且句子不完整，应删除多余部分并补全句子。

× Well arguing is commonly found when I was having a chatting with friends because we are different but the first thing.

✓ Well, arguing commonly happened when I was chatting with friends because we are different, but the first thing is...

“is commonly found”时态不当，应使用过去时“commonly happened”。另外，“having a chatting”表达错误，应为“chatting”。

× Well arguing is commonly found when I was having a chatting with friends because we are different but the first thing.

✓ Well, arguing commonly happened when I was chatting with friends because we are different, but the first thing is...

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语和后续内容，导致表达不清。

× But after arguing we're getting more close to each other and that's a good turn out.

✓ But after arguing, we get closer to each other and that's a good outcome.

“getting more close”表达不规范，应改为“get closer”。“turn out”用法不当，应改为“outcome”。

× ...interesting stuffs that would like to share with.

✓ ...interesting stuff that we would like to share.

“share with”后应有宾语，且此处不需要“with”，应直接用“share”。